"The day's just beginning, you see the girl you love, you don't know what to do or say, you're friends, you talk to eachother everyday, on the phone, computer, etc, you're walking with her, talking, laughing, having the time of your life, the sun hits ya, you smile at her she smiles at you, it's time to say goodbye, you hug and walk off, you're walking, past places where we played as kids, later you talk to eachother, time's ending, you say you'll see eachother tomorrow, you know what, you're in goddamn love, is there anything else better in the world"
2007-02-28 11:08:02 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
OMG when i read this poem i almost cryed. I am being serious. That has got to be the best poem i have ever heard. Well i dont know if i am supposed to give you any info. or not. But i like the poem.
2007-02-28 11:18:22 · answer #1 · answered by babygurl 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Is this a poem or a day out of your life? This could be the preface for a romantic novel. I don't see any poetry here, but I do think you have talent for writing.
2007-02-28 19:16:48 · answer #2 · answered by Linda W 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Excellent!
2007-02-28 19:15:02 · answer #3 · answered by David H 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well... its not exacly the best poem in the world...actually, ts not that good. i think that it could be a pretty good like, short story type of thing tho.
2007-02-28 19:18:58 · answer #4 · answered by Linda S 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
as much as i hate to say this...but that's not a poem...nothing rhymes...other than that not bad
2007-02-28 19:17:38 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sorry but are you sure youre friends arent deaf
2007-02-28 19:14:30 · answer #6 · answered by beardedoctopus 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ummmm how do I say this?
2007-02-28 19:13:12 · answer #7 · answered by beenabytch 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh how cute... MARRY ME!
2007-02-28 19:21:06 · answer #8 · answered by SUNNY 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋