man jumped inside tha tanks cockpit dodgen bullets each long as a chopstick,got his m16 out hopin he aint drop it,lemme tell u this,war is rough but deres no way we can stop it.......his son in his room opinen his locket pictures of dad before goin to iraq,son puy it in his pocket,now im one of tha lucy ones not a sad son dad aint gone to tha army me an him have fun,but if yo dad did i feel bad fo u hope him or yo mom come through.....now back to tha war bullets all in da air,man got lucky bullet only hit a trickle of his hair,so man got a granade put it in his hands chucked it and watched it explode in sand,but what man saw really broke his heart might be an enemy but hes seein people be torn apart!but before man could think he heard a dozen bullets,each strong enough to make a buzzcut from a mullet...so he ran in a house for shelter met his crewmen in there they needed another helper,but at that second bullets came spewin through the wall,man got under the table aint no time to stand
2007-02-28 08:59:18 · 6 answers · asked by wamzy 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
tall,but before his very eyes he saw his crewman fall,crewman tried to be a hero and all bad call,so man got mad shot his m16 bullets riquocheting hearing a ping tong ting,man didnt know how many mes that he killd and then he jus realized and had a little chill,see man didnt think of what he has done man jus killed someone.
2007-02-28 09:02:17 · update #1
its a seriouse rap!i guess i put humor in all my raps thats why i make funny raps 2.
2007-02-28 09:12:37 · update #2
I actually found that funny for some reason.
2007-02-28 09:03:51 · answer #1 · answered by Ændru 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'm an old woman, but, you tell a great story in your rap. You are GOOD GOOD GOOD....keep on writing this and you may go places. PS I don't like most rap but I could listen to this one.....
2007-03-07 08:47:12 · answer #2 · answered by missellie 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow you should be on the White Rapper show on VH1
2007-02-28 17:02:01 · answer #3 · answered by mdiggity 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
it has really good point and i like it a lot keep writing
2007-02-28 17:16:38 · answer #4 · answered by laura g 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yo dat iz ILL!
2007-03-04 23:03:28 · answer #5 · answered by jib j 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its the best rap ive ever heard its like my grandma cookies its so good mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyjfhgsrjhgrt,jhtkrjhnktrqwhjkhtbkhtbeakrah17321864829766666666666666666666666666633333333333333333333555555555555555111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------0
2007-03-02 20:57:44 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋