One by one they enter his gate
One by one they fall to his hate
One by one their souls are burned
One by one their sins are engraved upon them
One by one they are forever condemn
One by one their hearts are adjourned
One by one they cry
One by one they die
I have posted this poem before but i have made some changes to it tell me what you think
2007-02-28 08:41:13 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Not a very great achievement !!!
2007-02-28 08:46:39 · answer #1 · answered by cabridog 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it, you took the one of the darkest subjects and turned it into something completely awesome.
like I said before, I will buy you first novel.
2007-03-01 16:46:41 · answer #2 · answered by Chameleon ♥ Girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cute, tight prose and rhytnms
2007-02-28 16:46:02 · answer #3 · answered by flowerpet56 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋