I'm writing a story, and I need a surprising twist to throw in somewhere. It's about 2 girls who meet a fairy in the woods, but the fairy can't leave and go back to Fairyland or wherever. What should I do to make this more interesting?
2007-02-28 06:03:46 · 9 answers · asked by Kaylie 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
put a quentin tarantino twist on it, have the fairy get f*cked up on coke and kill the two girls. then, she eats a burger and cries herself to sleep.
2007-02-28 06:06:35 · answer #1 · answered by johnmfsample 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
make the fairy almost evil and/or desperate
say she was cursed from her home land thousands of years ago and finally someone has come across her in a small, desolate place in the forest and to be able to break the curse she needs to convince one of the girls to drink from the small stream the leads people into her world...by doing this the girl who drank the water must become a fairy forever stuck in the forest until she can convince someone to drink from the stream and thenthe orginal fairy is allowed to return to her homeland. maybe a twist could be that the fairy's real test could be that instead of decieving the girl she instead choses to stay there for enternity rather than curse someone else with her unlucky fate and the fairies from her homeland grant her absolution-- because she is redeemed because the ultimate test was that she had to show compassion and in otherwords "do the right thing"
was that too confusing? when i get ideas i ramble but if your even remotely interested in my idea feel free to talk back and maybe i can help explain it alittle better
hope it helped,
VESPER
2007-03-03 19:04:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fairy is afraid of her mother, The Queen of Meie (kingdom of magic). The queen is very powerfull sorceress, and her daughter cannot live up to her standards. She is also afraid that if she leaves forest, Sleeping Dragon will awake and terrorize the near village. Then introduce a Shepard boy (clumsy,but cute), who wakes the dragon up, fairy forced to deal with a problem, learning how to stand up to her mom, falling in love with the Shepard, hero now (still clumsy, even cuter), girls having fun, going home, growing up....:-))))))).
2007-02-28 14:32:09 · answer #3 · answered by Romentari 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is a huge forest fire. By safeing the girls the fairy gets to go backs home,but declines and goes with the girls.
2007-02-28 14:14:58 · answer #4 · answered by ladyj1888 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about the fairy finds a way to absorb the bodies of the two girls, and she becomes them and they are now trapped in the woods forevermore.
2007-02-28 16:05:48 · answer #5 · answered by concernedjean 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are so many exciting twists that can take place in the woods. A mysterious tree that opens up and swallows things or that has concealed passages in it--dimensions to other realms.
ElijahC.
2007-02-28 14:19:54 · answer #6 · answered by ElijahC 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Suddenly, all the characters are hit by a bus.
the end.
2007-02-28 14:10:46 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i would start over... many authors know the twists and ending before they start writing...
2007-02-28 14:06:43 · answer #8 · answered by Tacyella 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
if i gave you an ending to your story and you used it wouldn't that be plagiarism? is that what kind of writer you want to be? write your own ending you'll be a much better writer for it.
2007-02-28 14:10:41 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋