http://bwboard.net/index.php?topic=29356.0
How does this story sound so far?
2007-02-28 03:23:43 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Yes, it's really there and you dont need money...
2007-02-28 04:55:31 · update #1
The first and most important rule is:
Never show anyone your work before it is finished.
Just finish it then let us know. I wont read an unfinished work.
It's unfair to make comments on unfinished work. As a matter
of fact, as I see it, it's down right rude to comment on unfinished work.
2007-02-28 03:32:41 · answer #1 · answered by hunterentertainment 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the url you list is a site that requires a membership to enter. Why would any reputitable prublisher put a story up that isn't finished (--so far?).
I don't agree that its "rude" to comment on unfinished works. If there is a problem with what you're writing, you should know about it now, before its done and it has to be entirely rewritten.
I would be happy to give you an honest critique on your story if you send it to me thru email. Remember though that this will be an HONEST critique meant to help. Only ask for it if you're willing to accept the comments.
I don't need to steal the work of others, I have my own.
2007-02-28 03:33:17 · answer #2 · answered by Wanda K 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is a World Message Board for Beyonce fans that requires a login, password and probably money too. Is your story really here ? I work for an online freelancing writing site that pays good money for good stories, and if you have one I can read I will send you the link as we are always looking for good writers. I was disappointed not to have found your story at link above, provided, though, oh well maybe next time . . .
2007-02-28 04:10:37 · answer #3 · answered by SojournSeeker 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why does that link lead to Beyonce's message board?
Being an aspiring editor, I'd really like to read your story and give you whatever advice I can. Send it to my email address in an MS Word attachment. kmnichols2@yahoo.com
2007-02-28 11:46:53 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think of its stable, yet i became right into somewhat puzzled with regard to the beginning up. Im guessing that she became into broken up with? this is worthwhile to to make sparkling that, commence off so as that the reader is conscious whats happening. is this like a tale tale, or a diary get right of entry to? and he or she in no way had a chum, yet she had a boyfriend? Bit complicated, and fairly of "carles", write Carley, so all of us be responsive to her real call, and not an affectionate nickname, persay. stable activity!
2016-10-02 02:53:18 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's great. Keep going.
2007-02-28 03:36:03 · answer #6 · answered by Panama Jack 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋