Check my Deck out please?

Question

Creatures
2 Dark Ruler Ha Des
1 Raviel
2 Dark Lucius Lv8
1 DL lv6
1 Dl lv4
2 invader of darkness
1 mask of darkness
1 jinzo
1 exiled force
2 giant orc
3 giant germ
1 mobius
2 goblin king
1 sangan
1 night assailant
Traps
2 sak armors
1 ring of destructin
1 barrel behind the door
1 torrential tribute
2 magic jammers
2 threatening roar
1 riryuoki field
1 call of the haunted
Spells
1 double spell
1 monster reincarnation
1 premature burial
1 pot of avarice
1 lighting vortex
1 cost down
1 swords of revealing light
2 axe of despairs
1 united we stand
1 heavy storm
1 book of the moon
1 creature swap
1 giant trunade
1 noble man of crossout

I fluctuate between two dark lucius lvl 4 and i need to get another level 6. I am working on a legible sideboard so i can take out the Dark Lucius completely if i chose to. IT will consist of 2-3 infernal hammers one more Raviel and some more trap and magic cards. only been playing for 6 months it runs smoothly.

Answer 1

I'm glad you've never drawn an opening hand of HaDes, Raviel, Lucius 8, Jinzo, and Invader of Darkness!

You seem to have a few more cards than you probably want. There are quite a few tributes as well - I expected to see Mausoleum of the Emperor and Brain Control after getting a look at the monster lineup. I doubt it would hurt to side out the Lucius suite entirely - if you keep it in, you might consider Riryoku, always great support for monsters that have to destroy opposing monsters in battle. If you had Dark Necrofear, that would also give you the option of siding in some return from out-of-play.

Answer 2

You have a good deck to work with, but it needs to be smaller, I don't know what your straegies are, but I would toss 1 giant trunade, 1axe of despair, 1 invader of darknes and 1 magic jammers and 1 sangan.
you want to have about 40-42 cards in your deck 20 monsters, 12 spells, 8 traps.
Side deck jinzo since most people are not using too many traps.
You also have too many tributing monsters in your deck, if you are on your last draw with this deck and you draw a tributing monster then your in trouble.
Overall this could be a VERY powerful deck if you tweek it.

Answer 3

That's sweet i don't gotta tell anything to do cause you all good your cards are flowing very well together, only thing i can say is that you don't need the "noble man of crossout". A deck like yours i would love to find out if it would be able to take out my #1 deck it will be great,challenging but fun duel. You should be able to take out a lot of good duelist though keep it up.

Answer 4

Awesome Dude

Answer 5

that's a cool deck it should go agensed my hero deck!

Answer 6

if u had a time wizard in there it would be almost unbett able

Answer 7

great deck

Answer 8

cool!