"The day's just beginning, you see the girl you love, you don't know what to do or say, you're friends, you talk to eachother everyday, on the phone, computer, etc, you're walking with her, talking, laughing, having the time of your life, the sun hits ya, you smile at her she smiles at you, it's time to say goodbye, you hug and walk off, you're walking, past places where we played as kids, later you talk to eachother, time's ending, you say you'll see eachother tomorrow, you know what, you're in goddamn love, is there anything else better in the world"
2007-02-27 23:23:14 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
hope you dont mind but i copied and pasted this poem to start off a song that im writing. thanks lost! this poem is deep stuff man keep it up.
2007-02-27 23:32:02 · answer #1 · answered by tanor s 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good
2007-02-28 08:36:35 · answer #2 · answered by 0110111001101111 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nope!! And I think that's beautiful!! It makes me feel really good!!
Keep writing!!
2007-02-28 07:29:41 · answer #3 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really liked your peom alot. Very deep!!! :) I liked the details you put in it.
2007-02-28 07:29:14 · answer #4 · answered by Ebby♥♥ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
So romantic, very well
2007-02-28 07:30:48 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋