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Question

can u inspect my resume? there would be many errors here

Many men know the siemens, but they little know what siemens do accurately.
Since Siemens doesn’t make direct consumer’s good but almost help other factories at behind so that they can make better production.
Like that, If I am chosen by intern at Siemens, I will be a hidden supporter, although I can not participate in direct management activities.
I will be a passionate person who helps staff so that your result can shine.

Answer 1

Please see if the following would be useful. I have tried not to improve on the factual contents of what you have written, nor do I vouch for its correctness. You can make changes based on your perception of the facts and your special skills.
"Siemens is a well-known company, but many are not aware that it does not directly manufacture all consumer goods sold under their brand name. Siemens gets some products made by others, giving them technical and other support to maintain quality.
If selected as an intern in Siemens, I would strive my best to learn my job well so that I could make an effective contribution to the Company's profit and progress, particularly with my skills in people relationship."

Answer 2

Many people, Siemens, consumers Goods other factories behind the scenes, omit LIKE THAT, I cannot participate directly, results. who helps your staff, results