I need to write a story with an animal in it.I thought about saying I went to the animal shelter to get a dog,it got sick,then got better.That was all I could think of.
2007-02-27 16:30:39 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
It sounds like a good story to me. Why do you want a dog in the story? How does it make you feel to look at all the dogs at the animal shelter. Was it hard to choose the dog. What made you decide to choose that dog. Give details of color and sound and smell--anything you think it was like or might be like. Do you name the dog right away, or wait? How does the dog respond to you? Do you love each other right away. Is the dog afraid? Happy? Does he lick or jump or do anything.
When the dog gets sick, that is a complication and you can get the reader worried about whether the dog will get well or not. Who helps you with the sick dog? Or are you all alone? Are you able to take the dog to the vet? What does the vet tell you? How do you take care of the sick dog? While you are taking care of the dog do you two start to love each other more? When and how do you know that the dog is getting better? How do you feel about that. How does the dog act when he/she is well again? What will you and your dog do to celebrate the recovery?
2007-02-27 17:07:54 · answer #1 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Another story line would be is that you found a stray dog and took him home. Your mother wasn't too happy, but she allowed the dog to stay in the basement for a while. He was sick, starving, dirty, and you nursed him back to health. You named him Buddy. You notified the animal shelter and in the end no one claimed him . By that time he worked his way into your heart and you adopted him and now he is a wonderful pet. You taught him tricks, he became your constant companion. He changed your life because he taught you to be a caring and loving young man.
2007-02-28 00:42:28 · answer #2 · answered by cardgirl2 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about expanding on your original idea by writing about finding a sick animal in the wild like a bird or a rabbit or something nursing it back to health and returning it to the wild. You can even elaborate how you where on vacation and stumbled upon this poor hurt creature, how it became close to you and how it reacted when returning it back to its homeland... Its also a little hard to help with ideas when in fact I am not sure what exactly its for, age group its for in terms of writing or even what are the guidelines to follow... Good luck!
2007-02-28 00:42:47 · answer #3 · answered by Oscar T Clown 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you add adjectives and adverbs to your writing, it gives more detail. Here is a sample. The dog ran. i.e. The big fat brown dog ran very quickly down the long narrow path.
2007-02-28 00:56:16 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YOU NEED TO BE MORE SPECIFIC SO THAT I CAN HEALP YOU...BUT IF YOUR WRITTING ABOUT AN ANIMAL, YOU SHOULD HAVE AT LEAST THREE MAIN POINTS. LET ME GIVE YOU SOME...MAN'S BEST FRIEND, IS THE DOG AS WE ALL KNOW, HOWEVER, A DOG CAN BE A LOT OF TROUBLE WHEN IT GETS SICK, IT NEEDS TO BE LOVED OR IT CAN DIE, AND MOST IMPORTANT IN NEEDS TO BE CHECKED REGULARLY BY A VETERINARIAN.
if you need more healp, please be more specific with your question..hope i healped
2007-02-28 00:40:21 · answer #5 · answered by Izeth G 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How bout went to adopt dog from shelter......When u were asleep robber breaks into ur house......dogs sleeping on ur bed with you.........robber sneaks into ur room......robber then pulls a gun on u in ur sleep.....he steps closer bumps into dresser knock something off it......dog wakes up and tackles him before he can fire a shot at you.
2007-02-28 00:39:53 · answer #6 · answered by you-who 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
U COULD WRITE ABOUT A PET U GOT & HOW IT BECAME SO IMPORTANT TO U THAT YOU GOT OBSESSED WITH TAKING CARE OF IT?
2007-02-28 00:44:21 · answer #7 · answered by tupac4evaa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋