you can give an opinion but correct the sentence and if you can give a sentence the has a stronger position of the banning of whaling..
Japan must halt the butchering of whales.
2007-02-27 13:23:36 · 6 answers · asked by ssdesv 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
"It is imperative that" would be redundant. Your original sentence is understood to be imperative. You are telling Japan what it must do. Of course, you must have reasons to support your statement. Otherwise, it is just your opinion and is easily dismissed.
2007-02-27 13:42:25 · answer #1 · answered by I'm Not 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It is imperative that Japan halt the butchering of whales.
2007-02-27 13:29:22 · answer #2 · answered by artemisaodc1 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
This sentence is grammatically correct.
Who are we to decide the fate of another mammal. What are we cannibals or animals?
2007-02-27 13:32:57 · answer #3 · answered by chrisandlane 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your sentence is good. How about
Japan should cease senseless slaughtering of the whales.
Just a thought.
2007-02-27 13:28:54 · answer #4 · answered by lavachk1 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
looks good to me.
2007-02-27 13:27:20 · answer #5 · answered by missingfeet 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"grammatical" is wrong as well
2007-02-27 13:42:02 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋