"The day's just beginning, you see the girl you love, you don't know what to do or say, you're friends, you talk to eachother everyday, on the phone, computer, etc, you're walking with her, talking, laughing, having the time of your life, the sun hits ya, you smile at her she smiles at you, it's time to say goodbye, you hug and walk off, you're walking, past places where we played as kids, later you talk to eachother, time's ending, you say you'll see eachother tomorrow, you know what, you're in goddamn love, is there anything else better in the world"
2007-02-27 13:19:51 · 22 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
i think u are in love
2007-02-27 13:23:39 · answer #1 · answered by dee_ann 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good...reminds me of being jealous of two people in love. It's that feeling you get when you wish you had a significant other at the moment. You're a great poet...that work should be published or made into a song.
2007-02-27 21:23:12 · answer #2 · answered by Steve D 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you posers need to stfu. poems dont have to rhyme!!! MOST poems dont freaking rhyme. so shut up. poems that rhyme are normally for 5 year olds. like dr. suess. so SHUT UP. im tired of people like you hating poems cause 'theeyy dont rrhhyyyyyyymmeee!!!'
its really good though... i kinda dont like the etc thingy though. it doesnt sound like it would be in a nice poem. but its great!
2007-02-27 21:25:45 · answer #3 · answered by Marissa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dont like it 2/10
2007-02-27 21:22:19 · answer #4 · answered by xxxx 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its not too bad, rather nice....but leave out the word goddamn...there is no need for you to use that word and you can still get your point across
2007-02-27 21:24:17 · answer #5 · answered by ♥Minnie Mouse♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Marry me.. lol... jk.. Where do we get guys like you?? I need one :( who has poems of me.. and nice things.. try showing it to her.. she'll absolutly love it.. and you.. It's so cutee... i want to cry and have a boyfriend :¨(
2007-02-27 21:26:55 · answer #6 · answered by The.Girl.From.The.Rockshow 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sucks. sorry, but only idiot romantics would take this poem seriously, it sounds like a fumbled sentance, and you didn't format in correctly.
2007-02-27 21:26:13 · answer #7 · answered by darkmaster 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like a song. it doesn't rhyme. but pretty sweet
2007-02-27 21:23:13 · answer #8 · answered by kyrys 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont "like" it.... i kno a poem i wrote it...
as i sit here,
broken hearted
came to crap but
only farted.
went outsied and
took a chance,
went to fart and
crapped my pants.
2007-02-27 21:23:20 · answer #9 · answered by Kristin M 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
That god damn ain't neccery man. Other than that, it's really good.
2007-02-27 21:24:49 · answer #10 · answered by Robby M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋