Okay I have no idea what's wrong in these sentences so help me out, please?!
1. There is a huge number of togetherness in this fraternity.
2. Please divide the candy between the five girls.
3. Shaneeka Collins is the most favorite of Mrs. Leward's students.
4. Television is his favorite media.
2007-02-27 11:41:04 · 10 answers · asked by =D 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
1. You can't have a number of togetherness.
2. You can divide candy between the girls, You can divide candies.
3. You can't say most favorite, it's just '... is the favorite of...'
4. Thats sentance just doesn't sound right, maybe 'His favorite type of media is Television.'
2007-02-27 11:46:30 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
1. "Togetherness" cannot be numbered. It should be something like "There is a huge feeling of togetherness in this fraternity."
2. This is not clear. According to the sentence, the candy is between the five girls, and you are being asked to divide it. It should be "Please divide the candy among the five girls."
3. "Most favorite" is incorrect. It should be "Shaneeka Collins is Mrs. Leward's favorite student." or "Shaneeka Collins is the most favored of Mrs. Leward's students."
4. "Media" and "Television" need to match in plurality. It should be "Television is his favorite medium".
2007-02-27 11:57:45 · answer #2 · answered by mocelled2002 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1) number isnt the right word...maybe say amount- There is a huge amount of togetherness in this fraternity.
2) between would mean if there were two people- Please divide the candy AMOUNG the five girls sounds better.
3) most favorite is horrible grammar.- Shaneeka Collins is Mrs Leward's favorte student.
4) hmmmmm..- Television is his favorite FORM of media.
2007-02-27 11:52:11 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Mommy to 3 year old Jacob and baby on the way♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. There is a huge amount of togetherness...
2. Please divide the candy among the five girls.
3. Shaneeka C is Mrs. L's favorite student.
4. His favorite media is television.
2007-02-27 11:52:06 · answer #4 · answered by Quarter Midget Mom 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
(huge number) should be a lot
Please divide this candy between the five girls.
Shaneeka Collins is Mrs. Leward's most favorite student
Her favorite media is television.
Just a guess :)
2007-02-27 11:47:06 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. Change "number" to "amount"
2. Change "between" to "among"
3. Take out "most"
4. "His favorite media is television"
2007-02-27 11:51:14 · answer #6 · answered by moviestar_marilyn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1.) number of is unnecessary
2.) I think there should be a comma after please, this one's tricky
3.) "most" before favorite is unnecessary it's redundant
4.) His favorite media is television, is how it should read.
2007-02-27 11:47:32 · answer #7 · answered by It's Just My Opinion 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. i dont think togetherness belongs in there
2. ?
3.the most favored instead of the most favorite
4.media? t.v is not a media!
2007-02-27 11:47:57 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you dont put a bit of effort into your homework then when the test rolls around you'll be unprepared.
2007-02-27 11:50:01 · answer #9 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I was gonna answer these but the first response you got said it all..... so I gave her a thumbs up....
2007-02-27 11:49:12 · answer #10 · answered by JustJen 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋