good or bad be honest?

Question

everytime i see you its like our hole
past runs through my mind like
everytime we were together and
everytime you held my hand or kissed
my lips i can feel ur hand tuch my and
youre lips touch mine i hear your
voise so soft. whenever my life seems
to crumble my mind goes strait to you
like whenever i would call you in the
middle of the night just to say
goodnight and we would end up
talking for hours about nothing and
you never seemed to care when we
crossed the line between friends and
became so much more i found out
theres no going back. when i told you
i just wanted to be friends i knew
it wasnt possible to be just friends. what we
had was special and we cant erase our
past. now when i see you with her
i think of every moment we had
i think of you when im
with my guy and i know theres a
resone for that i thought you
mightwant to know
i still love you
but theres no going back

Answer 1

good, especially in the beginning. there it's poetic, but it's the middle it's not quite so poetic.

over-all very good, maybe a little mushy but you obviously tried to to that :)