a hiaqu has 5 sylobols in the first line 7 in the second and 5 in the last
The waves glisten by
The dock where i sit and cry
My sadness away
2007-02-27 10:43:27 · 7 answers · asked by a girl 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I LOVE IT! it is so beautiful and that is exactly what I feel like doing today. You just cheered me up with a sad haiku! amazing! p.s. ever thought of doing this as a living?
2007-02-27 10:57:39 · answer #1 · answered by o_0 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice. My favorite is the last line of the haiku. Keep it up! (Maybe your next one should be cheerful instead.)
2007-02-27 18:48:36 · answer #2 · answered by R. S 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's good. Keep experiementing with different poetry style, it may really help you to explain emotions. I assume this has personal meaning?
2007-02-27 18:57:15 · answer #3 · answered by It's Just My Opinion 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ooh I like it...
and by the way its spelled haiku.
2007-02-27 18:47:41 · answer #4 · answered by ♥♥♥♥♥ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Love it....
PS It's "haiku"
2007-02-27 18:50:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
dude..you know its good and you want strangers to praise you..lol..jk..
2007-02-27 18:47:22 · answer #6 · answered by ? 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
pretty nice!
Pure talent!
2007-02-27 18:46:20 · answer #7 · answered by thepenpal 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋