what do you think of this POEM?

Question

In the garden, the cat dodges pricks and vines.
In the garden, the silence stops at the brige where the water splashes upon the rocks
In the garden, the plants are cut oh, so perfectly.
In the garden, is where I love to stay

Answer 1

I like it, but maybe you should add a little more description. Like, "cool, crystal water". But I like it! Very peaceful. :)

Answer 2

I think that if you re-post this question in the category called...

Polls & Surveys (Entertainment section),

you will get a bunch more responses.

As for me, I think it's a nice poem...