I often write poem for the dude I like and I'm thinking of giving him this one next Sunday morning. What do you think?
Sunday
lazy dreaming dawn
a silence breathing morning air
oats alone in there
2007-02-27 04:48:45 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, and Transgender
It's Haiku...
On Sunday's I sleep in and make the oatmeal a bit later than usual.
2007-02-27 21:41:17 · update #1
I doesn't matter what other people think. It's what he thinks about the poem that counts the most.
2007-02-27 07:15:44 · answer #1 · answered by Jaybo 1 · 5⤊ 0⤋
What do I think?
I think it would be nice to have someone write me a poem whether it's Sunday morning or just the morning after.
Don't give up, bro....I like your haikus.
2007-02-27 05:14:30 · answer #2 · answered by behrmark 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
i imagine human beings might want to correctly sense free to have the opinion that they opt for. they should be able to precise there opinion, and those who pay interest (which should be many human beings) must have an open options, and perhaps replace there opinion. some critiques might want to no longer develop into something, besides the undeniable fact that it doesnt advise there valueless. even if no one treasures your opinion, you would possibly want to. Its what makes you who you're.
2016-10-17 09:23:15 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love the imagery: a slow climb out from Morpheus' embrace and the ease with which you then proceed into the arms of your lover. There's the poetry in life: from the synchronous awakening to make "porridge" together - from dreams to paradise.
2007-02-27 23:38:34 · answer #4 · answered by unclefrunk 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Sweet. Peace
2007-02-27 16:04:53 · answer #5 · answered by WB2003 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Wrong day to be asking me about poetic oats.
Watch out, I'm packing oatmeal and I know how to use it!
(This morning I put my oatmeal in the microwave to cook and it exploded all the place.)
So I'm shaking my Quaker in anger!
2007-02-27 05:12:06 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
it's really cute that you write poems...
keep writing them. is this one a haiku?
its hot
Have fun! ;D
2007-02-27 20:21:55 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I am not home next sunday.
2007-02-27 06:00:40 · answer #8 · answered by Lurker 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
First two lines are good - well up to your usual standard.
But, sweetie, I am so afraid to ask about your obsession with oats ...
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2007-02-27 05:32:38 · answer #9 · answered by abetterfate 7 · 5⤊ 0⤋
very nice and I hope he appreciates someone like you that writes poems for him!!
2007-02-27 08:13:11 · answer #10 · answered by Tony 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋