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Owner of the house is a rich lady who’s past husbands all died mysteriously and always left her a big amount of cash and stuff.Sylvia is hired to housekeep for her and she finds the house this brand new modern looking house with the latest tech, alarm systems etc. She is excited and starts planning a party.Shes is calling her best friend when a book on the shelf catches her eye suddenly. For some reason she picks up that book and turns directly to page 666 and finds out that the land that the neighborhood is built on was once a medieval time village, famous for its witches, serial killers and deranged maniacs from the mental asylum. The house itself is built on the graveyard that the convicted serial killers were buried on.
And right after she closes the book, she hears this noise in the kitchen. she thinks its maries daughter who she presumed was sleeping the entire time. But when she goes to check no one is there and there are no signs of anyone ever being in that room...

2007-02-26 17:52:15 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

ok so she gets all freaked out. the noises continue and it leads her on a wild goose chase. she calls the local police office but they just assume shes a drunk teenager crank calling them.

when she hangs up the phone, she sees the shadow of a man holding a knife in his hands going up the stairs...

she immediately thinks of the daughter and rushes up to the bedroom. she finds her sleeping but when she pulls back the covers, the finds a knife stuck in the girls throat...she screams out and a hand suddenly graps her by the neck and yanks her back...

THE END...whoa cliffhanger!

is it good?

2007-02-26 17:54:39 · update #1

gasp i wrote so much!! haha
its really similar to when a stranger calls....hmm ><

2007-02-26 17:55:15 · update #2

4 answers

yay yer laine!! i didnt know u could write so well.....Laine-the greatest horror story writer in history....hehehe
use it woman!!!

from ur best friend in the whole wide world
Viv*~

2007-02-26 18:04:39 · answer #1 · answered by angelBunii 2 · 1 0

Yeah, not terribly original I'm afraid.

2007-02-26 18:12:14 · answer #2 · answered by Voodoid 7 · 0 0

woop woop! scary!! haha
make the serial killer the rich lady!!! then it would explain the husbands deaths!!! yea~

2007-02-26 17:58:43 · answer #3 · answered by Skelepri 2 · 1 0

yes it is

2007-02-26 17:55:36 · answer #4 · answered by Mag 7 · 0 2

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