Here lies the body of Mary Lee
died at the age of one hundred and three
for fifteen years she kept her virginity
not a bad record for this vicinity.
2007-02-26 16:48:04 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
ooops. It's not a limerick. good point
2007-02-26 16:52:28 · update #1
That was her 1st 15 years.
For 88 she was a whore.
Will she get thru heavens door?
Mary Lee oh Mary Lee
Where oh where could U be.
Are you where it's cool,blue and dry?
Or with Satan between your thigh?
Oh why did Mary Lee have to die???
My daddy wanted some of her fur pie!
2007-02-26 16:57:29 · answer #1 · answered by bodacious baby 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
rated 'C-". Reasons: It's missing a line...[to be a standard-form limerick.] For instance:
'Here lies the body of Mary Lee
Died at the age of 103
for all those years
there was nothin but tears,
but at least she kept her virginity.'
is more the correct form...
(I wouldn't rate that version more than a "B-" either, cuz the
added line content isn't all that clever, but the form is a lot closer to the "standard" limerick)
2007-02-26 17:05:35 · answer #2 · answered by nomutilation4me 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
As a limerick, it's terrible. It's not a limerick. It's a humorous epitaph, though.
THIS is a limerick:
You're six feet above Mary Lee
Who died at one hundred and three.
She's known by the tarts
That inhabit these parts
For delaying her fecundity.
2007-02-26 16:50:51 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your limerick is fairly darned beggardly. and your punch line's somewhat too tawdy 3 and four are too short If for thumbs up you court docket then attempt and write something much less ordin'ry.
2016-10-02 01:38:56 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
2.
2007-02-26 16:52:25 · answer #5 · answered by Jezabel the annoyed cat 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't like poems,but I will give it a 10.
2007-02-26 16:51:55 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
4 of ten
2007-02-26 16:50:19 · answer #7 · answered by RANDELL 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
personally i dont like it,
trying too hard to rhyme and be funny
doesnt really work out in the end
and thats my opinion, honestly
2007-02-26 16:55:30 · answer #8 · answered by loveboatcaptain 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think this poems was wonderful because it saying that young females to day should wait untill they get married to have sex or not to have none at all
2007-02-27 05:08:05 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you can't talk about my 1st wife and sister that way... i oughtta kick yore a** , but since this's her epithet, i'll forgive you this time.... besides she'd get a kick out of it if she was here....so i give it a 7....
2007-02-26 16:58:42 · answer #10 · answered by geezer 51 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋