We are a group just starting and we want to expose our music to people but we dont know if the songs are good, so please listen to them and let us know. Give your opinion good or bad about each song, tell us what your fav. and just your thoughts on all 4 of them I know I cant give everyone 10 ots, but the answer with the most judgement in each of the songs (weather you think they are good or bad) will ge the 10 points.
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2007-02-26 15:37:23 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Ayy u guyz r good mann u guyz got good beatz in my opinion i liked "She," man i hope u guyz make it 2 bein big time juss remember get a good manager
O yea and to whoeva say rap is crap they jus bein stupid mann
2007-02-26 15:49:19 · answer #1 · answered by soul_rebel4o8 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Fly Like Me - 3/5
It's hard to understand some of the things that you are saying on this song and it is a little too repetitive. The lyrics are pretty good and you have serious talent but you need to use better pronunciation. I'm not saying slow down because that will change the feel of the music. It seemed like it was a little rushed in places and that didn't match the music very well.
Deja Vu - 2.5/5
This song matched the music better which is good. It also seemed to go smoother. I'm normally not that into rap but I like your music. The repeating seems to be a problem. I don't like how you repeat some parts of it right after saying it because that reminds me too much of annoying pop music.
Nothin 2 Lose - 5/5
I love this song. Can you make it so we can add it to our profiles?
Now back to reviewing the song....
This song is probably your best song. It shows how good you are better than your other songs. There are a few things about it that aren't good like when you say "I aint got nothin to lose" near the end of the song it's a little too quiet. In some parts of the song especially toward the middle the focus went from being on what you were saying to the instrumental. Maybe that's how you want it to be but that doesn't make for a good rap song.
She 2.5/5
The beginning of this song sucked. I'd consider revising of a few of the words in it. The instrumental and what your saying is good but that other stuff takes away from the song. 2 mins and 40 seconds into the song you start rushing again. It would be better if you stayed at one speed.
You mostly just need to work on the speed and timing and try to match the feel of the lyrics with the music a little more. You have the potential to be great so it's your choice if you want to go with it or waste it.
Almost forgot: Add some feeling to your rap. It's like you don't feel any of it so don't be afraid to show emotion because that will help make you better.
2007-02-26 23:59:17 · answer #2 · answered by Ashleigh 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the bgening of the first ( fly like me)song i like it but when the guy is singing the song he has no filling like all hes doing it like he just wants 2 finish he sounds like hes going 2 do this fast and go 2 sleep
and the first part of the song ( deja vu)
if sounds 2 much like 50 cent but the raping is better then the 1st song but its a good song i like it its my fav song that i heread
the first part of the song ( nothing 2 los) with the 2 guys saying this is a other loi song u should git rid of that part
but its good raping
the songs r realy good but the like beeping of wisling sound in the back ground sound it mess it all up go git rid of it
in the song (she) the first par when they r saying some thing messiss up and the baby voice messiss it up
but the raping in the song (she) is the best from all the songs
2007-02-26 23:56:33 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like Deja Vu and She(although that song title, "she" has got to go!) The first one sucks, the rapper's voice sounds wayyy too dull/boring. The 3rd one, the rapper, at first, sounds like Jim Jones, which I liked(lol), but the "yeah!'s" are way out of beat and I find them really annoying. I didn't listen for lyrical content, sorry, too lazy.
2007-02-26 23:55:56 · answer #4 · answered by FaceFullofFashion 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yo that stuff is fly...tell me if u like my rap its on tha question do you think my rap is good.please tell me i only got tha lyric but its good u con jus click on my picture and go to my asked questions itll be dere.
2007-02-26 23:43:57 · answer #5 · answered by wamzy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't really like rap but like that! Ya'll are really good!! I like your song De javu..!!!!
2007-02-26 23:43:40 · answer #6 · answered by Kiwi 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i cant hear whoever signes it its a good song though
2007-02-26 23:41:35 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I disagree with rap.
2007-02-26 23:41:00 · answer #8 · answered by ldsagjk a 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
i want the ten.
2007-02-27 07:13:08 · answer #9 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
rap is crap
2007-02-26 23:41:37 · answer #10 · answered by Brunette Diamond 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋