What do you think of my poem??

Question

You are the light in my darkness,

my shelter in a storm.

You give me strength when i am weak,

and your love to keep me warm.

When i was hurting, lost, abused,

it was then your faith that I had used.

When i was cold, depressed, and lonely,

I stayed alive by your love only.

When i felt pushed or shunned away,

it was then your friendship made me stay.

When I was sick and felt like dying,

I knew you loved me by your crying.

I knew you loved me, knew you cared,

you did what no one else had dared.

you took the time, to learn, to see,

just what i really am in me.

You listened to my thoughts and fears,

and helped me wipe away my tears.

You helped me learn, respect, and love,

to pray to God, my lord above.

You're the light in my darkness, I hope you'll see,

Ill love you, mommy #2, for eternity.

Answer 1

BEAUTIFUL! I know she'll be touched by it. It will be a real keeper. You might consider framing it for her. You are a thoughtful child to write it.

Keep writing!

Answer 2

Beautiful♥♥♥♥♥

Answer 3

Beautiful and I know that the lucky lady who you pass this poem onto will hold it close to heart forever.
As I read this, I thought of my mom so you are definitly able to send the message through your writing.

Answer 4

That poem is deep very deep and personal and you made sure that you captured very detailed moments in your life.I'm not even your mother and you brought tears to my eyes i felt as if you were talking to me.God Bless you sweet heart

Answer 5

absolutely fantastic, the woman that is going to receive this is very lucky.

Answer 6

Very nice she will like it ,i would of.

Answer 7

so sweet....