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5. Kitchen
The kitchen style taps usually goes hand in hand with kitchen cabinets, sink or home appliances as a whole complete kitchen set. Therefore, we provide a wide range of design in kitchen taps to match market demands accordingly. Although there are different functions and features in kitchen taps including pull out, pull down, spout high and spout low. We believe outstanding product design would eventually catch consumers’ eyes and attentions.

6 Thermal Faucet
We found out that the price level of thermal faucet and normal faucet are slightly different in retailer shops. However, in terms of scope of design style, there are limited selections in most of retailer channels, except showrooms. In the long term, the thermal faucets would be the main trend because the price is similar to non-thermal function. If so, we consider that the design will be consumer’s first priority. That is the reason we develop wide scale selections to meet customers’ demands.
(asking customers what is the target market demand, thermal or non-thermal? if the price is close.)

7. Sliding Bar
No matter in America, UK, Germany, the space of plastic shower program in retail stores is, the rotation rate and profit of sliding bars are quite high for retail stores themselves after our marketing research. Two years ago, manufacturers did design match with basin but didn’t bring too much bright effect. This year, we develop not only function-plus but also well-designed sliding bar as an adding value to stimulate customer’s purchasing desire.

Answer 1

5. Kitchen
The kitchen-style taps usually go hand-in-hand with kitchen cabinets, sink or home appliances; as a whole complete kitchen set. Therefore, we provide a wide range of design in kitchen taps to match market demands accordingly. There are different functions and features in kitchen taps: including pull out, pull down, spout high and spout low. We believe outstanding product design will eventually catch consumers’ eyes and attentions.

6 Thermal Faucet
We found out that the price levels of thermal faucets and normal faucets are slightly different in retailer shops. However, in terms of scope of design style, there are limited selections in most retailer channels, except showrooms. In the long term, the thermal faucets would be the main trend because the price is similar to the non-thermal function. If so, we consider that the design will be consumer’s first priority. That is the reason we develop wide-scale selections to meet customers’ demands.

7. Sliding Bar
In America, the UK, and Germany, no matter what is the space of plastic shower programs in retail stores, the rotation rate and profit of sliding bars are quite high for retail stores after our marketing research. Two years ago, manufacturers did design-match with basins but didn’t bring too much bright effect. This year, we developed not only function-plus but also well-designed sliding bars as an added value to stimulate customers’ purchasing desire.

Answer 2

5. Kitchen
The kitchen style taps usually goes hand in hand with kitchen cabinets, sink, or home appliances as a whole complete kitchen set. Therefore, we provide a wide range of design for kitchen taps to match market demands accordingly. Although, there are different functions and features in kitchen taps including pull out, pull down, spout high, and spout low. We believe outstanding product design would eventually catch consumers’ eyes and attentions.

6 Thermal Faucet
We found out that the price level of thermal faucet and normal faucet are slightly different in retailer shops. However, in terms of scope of design style, there are limited selections in most of retailer channels, except showrooms. In the long term, the thermal faucets would be the main trend because the price is similar to non-thermal function. If so, we consider that the design will be consumer’s first priority. That is the reason we develop wide scale selections to meet customers’ demands.
(asking customers what is the target market demand, thermal or non-thermal? if the price is close.)

7. Sliding Bar
No matter in America, UK, Germany, the space of plastic shower program in retail stores is the rotation rate and profit of sliding bars are quite high for retail stores themselves after our marketing research. Two years ago, manufacturers did design match with basin but didn’t bring too much bright effect. This year, we develop not only function-plus but also well-designed sliding bar as an adding value to stimulate customer’s purchasing desire.

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