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Question

my explaning is not good...you can use youare own words
Intertexts is not just the graphs or words, although intertexts can make readers more clearly to comprehend the substance, like the maps come out from the novel, but map is the real thing that we can touch, the idea I want to say is that intertexts is not a stuff, is a part of our life, because we can see many different of intertexts everyday, for instance, advertisements, magazines, signals, these things also can be the intertexts, we through the intertexts to communicate other people, then we actually use intertexts everywhere, no matter at home, or at school, we still can notice the intertexts around us.
Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that intertexts is the thing that can make people more closer to the others, for this novel, intertexts make people more easier to understand what the Christopher's feeling, and let readers know what the different between normal person and abnormal as well

Answer 1

okay

Answer 2

Your grammAr seems okay, but you have a problem with run-on sentences and spelling.

grammar
explaining
your (own words)
more clearly comprehend (omit "to")
people more close to others (not closer)
know the difference between (cut off "as well")

Do you realize that each of your paragraphs contains only one run-on sentence? Sentences should not be more than 20 words, and they should vary in length.

Good luck. :)

Answer 3

Happy to check your grammer, though if you have Microsoft word simply paste your message in and click the icon that has a checkmark and ABC. It will correct most spelling and grammer errors.