2007-02-26 12:51:09 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Let us know it, please.
2007-02-26 13:03:24 · update #1
I'm able to use those words in a short story (probably in Spanish better than in English) but I can do that.
I wanted to know and read things of other people. I need it. It's interesting to share the different ways people take with the same words. It's an exercise. In Yahoo! Spanish is a common question.
Beside, I practise my poor English. Thanks all of you.
2007-02-26 13:14:15 · update #2
It was a hot Summer that remarkable year,
And the air was fresh as a newly mowed lawn,
The loneliness left me,my dear,
When the misunderstanding was finally gone.
For you were forgiven ,it is true.
And we have a new chance to start anew.
2007-02-26 13:08:05 · answer #1 · answered by MaryBeth 7 · 3⤊ 2⤋
Lonliness flows through me; a torrent of sadness this cold spring. I have been alone all too long now; it was a misunderstanding - the things i did had a good reason behind them. All i need is to be forgiven, have another go, a chance to redeem myself....I pray the gentle, clean fresh air of summer brings with it new hope. xxxx
2007-02-26 13:17:28 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
Summer ~ By me
The end of Summer is like a barrage of loneliness and slowly cooling fresh air. The trees look down upon me, misunderstanding, and not willing to take the chance of letting me climb upon them, afraid that i will break their delicate limbs. As i skulk, hiding away from the shunning that the last weeks of August have given me, i am welcomed into the open arms of Autumn, and forgiven for all my past wrongs....
Deep, huh..
2007-02-26 13:02:53 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 1⤋
Summer
Fresh Air, Chance
Misunderstanding
Loneliness
Forgiven
Fresh Air, Chance
Summer
2007-02-26 14:44:30 · answer #4 · answered by eli 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Eyes closed on a summer day
so perfect in every way
yet every breath of fresh air
are scented with lilac and dispair
Lonliness
it comes by chance
with fireflies floating mid-air
I do the forbidden dance
Melancholy is not not forgiven
by those who's lives are selfishly driven
and I stand in the beating sun
misunderstanding myself is done
So eyes closed on a summer day
I just melt and wither away.
M. Tun
2007-03-03 15:27:27 · answer #5 · answered by LuckyMo! 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
As I stand here in the summer and fresh air
Without a dream for I to dare
The loneliness
Should I confess
To be given the chance
Of a new romance
The final landing
Or am I misunderstanding
The love to be forgiven
And finally be in heaven
2007-02-26 13:25:24 · answer #6 · answered by Zenlife07 6 · 4⤊ 1⤋
There's something about the summer,
Hot long days, short nights,
flowers, vibrantly showing off,
seas calm, warm rain,
Some love the summer, others hate it,
bees flying around, attacking the flowers,
outside eating,
All these thing are associated with summer
What Joy
2007-03-02 07:48:41 · answer #7 · answered by lazybird2006 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Rain fell
Rain fell on me
Not from that sky at which a child looks up
that kind enclosing cup
but through eternal space
kissing continuously like unemotional death
my upturned face
2007-02-27 08:52:34 · answer #8 · answered by Professor 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
No, I can't do that for you. But if you reach down to the pit of your
soul, using your heart, to influence your mind, I know you can!
Meditate before starting, jot down pertinent things you want to say
and the the pen will just flow with YOU'RE true feeling!!!
Go Girl Go!
Best o Luck, I know you can do it!
Summer
2007-02-26 13:06:03 · answer #9 · answered by Diana D 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Deeply sorry,my friend.I agree with the first answer:you need practice.
Actually,i admire you:post a question in English !!!!!!!!!!!!!with YOUR English!
I suggest you not to post in another languages till you know it very well.
Please don t get angry for my suggestions.I'm just telling you the truth:sweetie,need to study more!!!!(why don't you read in English?)
2007-02-27 23:09:53 · answer #10 · answered by Sol RIC 1 · 0⤊ 4⤋