i really need help with a poem for english, could someone please help me with one. Not from a bood but one you make up.
it needs to have alliteration and preferably 8 lines
2007-02-26 12:41:22 · 3 answers · asked by joeycaperoney 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Yes, I can help you with your poem, but I have to have an idea of what you want to say and perhaps an outline of how you would like to say it. Eight lines is quite short, so it ought to have some punch at the end, and it ought to obey rules of rhythm and rime. I suggest iambic pentameter, though you may not know what that is. Your first task, though, is to come up with an idea that can be succinctly expressed.
2007-02-26 12:55:24 · answer #1 · answered by obelix 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My name is Pancho
I live on a rancho
I work for two pesos a day
I go home to Lucy
She give me some *****
and take my two pesos away
Hmmmm, 6 lines,
La la la
la la la
OK that's 8
2007-02-26 20:45:45 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
My soul keepeth the waters which shines beneath the moon.
The dark bestial lust of tears that tatters and shatters my soul.
Thou splittith my soul with masks of the faint at heart.
Why deny my justice at birth, what giveth thou the right.
To grovel beneath thy seat which shatters my heart.
Why deny my justice at death, what giveth thou the right.
I cherished my Mother, I cherished my soul. Thou washed my blood away with no stain at all.
Whilst the justice was void thou lacketh no soul.
2007-02-26 21:03:10 · answer #3 · answered by Don't Know 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋