Pls. help correcting this .."When I look back ON 27 years, about one third of my life.."?

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Pls. help correcting this .."When I look back ON 27 years, about one third of my life.."?

Is ON a correct preposition? What can you suggest?

2007-02-26 12:16:45 · 1 answers · asked by pink 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay

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Possibly this may sound better:

When I look back at the past (or first, or middle) 27 years of my life,I am astounded to realize that that is about one third of the time i've been on this earth.

2007-02-26 14:23:54 · answer #1 · answered by free2bme55 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋