What do you think of this?

Question

Why can't I be happy?
Why am I always sad?

Why do people laugh,
When they don't understand.

Deep inside I'm hurting,
From everything they've done.

All I want is to smile,
And be free under the sun.

There is a journey ahead,
That I must take.

How can I take it though?
When I haven't much strength.

They never make my spirit rise,
They only melt it slowly.

Inside my heart is dying,
From all of the pain.

I want them to heal the pain,
But they'd only be doing it in vain.

They don't understand me,
Maybe that's why they're mean.

Even that's not a good reason,
To be doing this to me.

Why can't they see?
That they're hurting me.

Don't I care to them?
Or am I just a problem.

I'd like to know,
What I am in their eyes.

Do they really care?
Or is it all-pretend.

All I'd like to know,
Is why they hurt me so.


<3a poem i wrote about things going on in my life at the time. what do you think<3

Answer 1

Oh that's really sad huni, I can tell that it comes from the heart.
I don't really know what to say to make you feel better but you should talk to someone you trust about why you're feeling this way. Try to ignore it all, if you've tried this method and it's failed, you have to do something about it yourself, stand up to them. I don't know who you're talking about here but you should speak to someone in a superior position to them (principal, parents) and ask them to approach these bullies and stop them from causing you this pain and suffering. Don't be afraid... you have to do it. Your fate lies in your own hands. You can beat these horrible people. You have every right to live life and enjoy it pet and no-one has the right to stand in your way. Hold your head up and be confident and happy because I know that you have it in you, deep down... let it out. Think positive and positive things will happen.
No-one has the right to treat you badly. If they are so nasty and inconsiderate, believe me babe, they're not worth even thinking or worrying about. You seem like a wonderful person and I hope you realise how lucky you are to be you.I hope I didn't ramble on a whole lot and I hope that this helps inspire you to stop these bullies in their tracks and most importantly help you overcome the mental hurt and believe in yourself. Don't waste your precious life letting this get you down like this.
You are amazing, don't let anyone tell you any different.
Good luck pet : )

Answer 2

Wow, that's one of the best poems I've ever heard! Poems that are that deep and heartfelt are great. Don't just leave that poem with yourself and Yahoo! Answers..submit it in a contest. I've heard you can win some BIG money on http://www.poetry.com , I think that poem IS a winner. If you don't win, keep looking for poetry contests. You're definetly a true poet, but you may not know it..LoL.

Keep working hard and show people that poem! Don't stop poetry! If you ever make new poetry, I'd love to hear it. Just e-mail me at [e-mail] and say that you're the person who made the poem I saw.


Good Luck and Keep Up The Good Work!!

Sincerely
,Phil

Answer 3

Derivative. Sounds like some half-baked teenage angst to me. Stop whining.

Answer 4

I think it`s really good i can really associate with that great poem it makes a point.

Answer 5

dude,
nice poem is it true though, check out my profile joy angel you can email me if you want to. If ya just need to talk i'm here

Answer 6

It is a very deep poem, I do not see it from your point, but it is very good.

Answer 7

Not bad at all. You should submit it to some poetry websites.

Answer 8

go get a life

Answer 9

I think this is a pretty good poem.... sometimes it happen to me too ... SOMETIMES

Answer 10

That's deep. I like it.