When Karen the owner opened the door to let us in, we were drawn instantly to the puppy pens.
2007-02-26 05:33:49 · 3 answers · asked by nothingbutthenet 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Thanks everyone. I knew I needed another comma, I just didn't know the right placement for it. My handbook doesn't give any examples that reference this particular example closely enough.
2007-02-26 06:09:16 · update #1
When Karen, the owner, opened the door to let us in, we were drawn instantly to the puppy pens.
2007-02-26 05:40:23 · answer #1 · answered by Heather Y 7 · 5⤊ 0⤋
Many would tell you to have it re-written with better grammar.
"We were drawn instantly to the puppy pens when Karen, the owner, opened the door to let us in."
2007-02-26 13:41:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
I agree with Heather Y. artlogical's answer ends in a proposition ("in") which is grammatically incorrect.
2007-02-26 14:01:43 · answer #3 · answered by scotchbrandy 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋