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One day sunny and Stephanie were chillin at there house, Stephanie decide to go to the store.
Sunny decide to read a book until suddenly he change his mind and decide to play outside. Stephanie go back from the store and saw sunny . Stephanie toll him to get in the house. Stephanie explain to sunny what had happen, Stephanie toll sunny there was robbery near their neighborhood , sonny didn’t care a lot about the robbery near their neighborhood so he said let’s go to the mall.
Stephanie knew it was bad idea but she went. Sonny drive to the mall and saw a guy in a black hoodie he face was unseen. He said to Stephanie he probably a nobody ..
Stephanie ask we should probably get back to the house.
Sunny didn’t care so he didn’t listen..

Two hours later Mr.kent sunny neighbor stared to walk his dog. Suddenly he decide to check stuff up outside. He saw robber going inside sunny and Stephanie house so quickly he call the cops and they came . Mr. Kent was looking were the robber went. Saw then he hear a screen, the officers run were the screen was. The robber got stuck on the stairs. The officers took him. Thirty minutes later sunny and Stephanie got home they saw there house a messes the chair was move the safe was open and they were worry the someone got in there house so they decide to call the police. The cops came and explain the situation and the officers gave sunny and Stephanie their money. Suddenly sunny saw footprints conmen from the safe he forgot to clean the footprints. Mr kent show up in there doors step and tool then the he call the police and the everything was safe and there nothing to worry about.

2007-02-26 00:59:06 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Homework Help

Is my homework I did it but I need someone to proofeed please help me
my mom is woking same dad

2007-02-26 01:08:34 · update #1

4 answers

Ok, I will write it the way it should be.

One day Sunny and Stephanie were chilling at their house. Stephanie decided to go to the store. Sunny decided to read a book. Then he changed his mind and decided to play outside. Stephanie got back from the store and saw Sunny. She told him to get in the house. She explained to Sunny what had happened.

Stephanie told Sunny there was a robbery near their neighborhood. He didn’t care a lot about the robbery near their neighborhood, so he said "Let’s go to the mall". Stephanie knew it was bad idea but she agreed. Sunny drove them to the mall and saw a guy in a black hoodie, but couldn't see his face. He said to Stephanie he is probably a nobody. Stephanie said they should probably get back to the house. Sunny didn’t care, so he didn’t listen.

Two hours later Mr.Kent, Sunny's neighbor, started to walk his dog. Suddenly he decided to check on some stuff outside. He saw a robber going inside Sunny and Stephanie's house, so he quickly called the cops and they came . Mr. Kent was looking where the robber went and then he heard a scream. The officers ran where the scream was. The robber got stuck on the stairs. After they helped him get unstuck, they took him with them.

Thirty minutes later Sunny and Stephanie got home.They saw their house was a mess.The chair was moved, the safe was opened, and they were worried that someone got in their house. So they decided to call the police. The cops came and explained the situation. The officers gave Sunny and Stephanie their money back that the robber stole. Suddenly Sunny saw footprints coming from the safe. The robber forgot to clean the footprints. Mr. Kent showed up and told them that he called the police and that everything was safe and there was nothing to worry about.


Ok, there you go. That should help you out. Good luck.

2007-02-26 01:32:46 · answer #1 · answered by teashy 6 · 0 0

There are so many mistakes.
Are you wanting correct English grammar and spelling or is this supposed to purposefully be somewhat Ebonics?
The name Sunny or Sonny always capitalize it. Decide how you are going to spell that name. Typically Sunny is female and Sonny is male.
Mr. (see the period) as in Mr. Kent
Toll (that's a word that means money exchanged for passage) as in toll booth.
The way you are using it in a sentence you need to use the word "told".
That is all I have time for. You just about need a total rewrite.
Pay better attention in class.

2007-02-26 09:12:01 · answer #2 · answered by thankyou "iana" 6 · 0 0

R u dat lazy ask ur mommy dude!

2007-02-26 09:07:21 · answer #3 · answered by Baby Girl 2 · 0 0

Type it in Word and press F7. That's what I do.

2007-02-26 09:25:35 · answer #4 · answered by cheryl r 1 · 0 0

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