Wandering. Into the darkness. Suffering. Always suffering. The choises of leaving existence.The question is this. Would it matter if I was alive or dead? Would you notice me then?
The pain of being a ghost is not that you don't exist.
The pain of being a ghost is the lack of confidence. Being strong.
And holding on. Will you notice me then?
Oh, will you notice me then? Lurking.
Trying to find the light I so deserve. Searching.
Trying to find my way.. But will if matter
If I dug my way back to the life I deserve? Would it all be the same? Would it matter if I was dead or alive?
Would you notice me then? The pain of being a ghost is not that you don't exist. The pain of being a ghost is the lack of confidence.
Being strong. And holding on. Will you notice me then? Oh, will you notice me? Maybe it's all for good. You know I just want you happy.Maybe with me Will ruin you Will sadden you
Maybe I will just be free. Maybe I will just be free. The pain of being a ghost...
2007-02-25 23:59:40 · 8 answers · asked by bkanastoplus 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
This song doesn't exactly mean anything to me now.. I've been kicked back into existence. Just felt like sharing it with you and to see what you think
2007-02-26 00:04:14 · update #1
Yes, I'm pretty sure you can dance to it. :)
2007-02-26 00:06:08 · update #2
Haha. Oh, and FYI, I wrote it without "using". in fact, i did not thinking. I just kept writing.
2007-02-26 00:09:53 · update #3
Sounds pretty good on paper but, the music will always make or break a song.
2007-03-04 14:57:26 · answer #1 · answered by Chris W 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. I think that any song or piece of writing that comes from inspiration somewhere inside the author - whether they've felt that way or not, always has meaning. Meaningful pieces tend to not suck. Or at least, sincere ones don't. Keep up your writing, one day we'll hear this on the radio. =)
2007-03-05 19:02:43 · answer #2 · answered by seasonschange 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds pretty good. Now all you have to do is write some music for it. Good luck.
2007-03-06 07:36:40 · answer #3 · answered by Harry 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it... But can I dance to it??
Doesn't heroine just make the best songs.
2007-02-26 08:05:35 · answer #4 · answered by .G. 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like you need some zoloft
2007-02-26 08:04:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds kinda dark wheres the hook?
2007-03-05 23:05:12 · answer #6 · answered by crengle60 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really good! u've got talent
2007-02-26 08:05:12 · answer #7 · answered by shay 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what kind of song is it?
2007-02-26 08:02:25 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋