help me please with my paper the part of the python?

Question

k well i have to write this paper 5 paragraphs and i have 8 paragraphs and i am in the part where the python attacks gabrielle in the cave how can i make this part like exiting!!!!!!!?????


This is a sample of what i got how can i make it interesting or more interesting to where gabrielle defeats that python how does he defeat it?


Gabrielle began hearing the hisses of the snake. He had his lamp with him he held it up and it lightened up the cave. Up on the ceiling were bodies humans, nymphs, muses, insects and different types of victims. Gabrielle got distracted the Python it took charge it came up to him in the fastest speed he’d ever seen. It knocked Gabrielle down rolling on the floor.

oh god that sounds gay!!

Answer 1

Spelling - lit the cave NOT lightened up.
Add witches to you cave ceiling and make Gabrielle a girl.

Gabrielle called to the muse of wisedom. "Help me oh revered muse". As the python reared up and began to sqeeze her, the muse called out, "the witch, the butterfly and mouse"
"Oh witch can you cast a spell' called GabrielleThe light in the cave began to change, it glimmered, it went dark ,then it glowed and the whole cave vibrated with light. The witch ,having cast her spell warned Gabrielle to be quick. but she, too was gone killed by the python.
Gabrielle called out "butterfly". A huge butterfly swooped down and fell on the floor. It's wings fell off and wrapped themselves around Gabrielle. By now the whole cave was pulsing with light, the fading screams of the dying muse were joined by the screams of the butterfly as the python crushed it to death. But oh god the light was fading would Gabrielle be able to see to get out.
"Mouse" she called,"Mouse please and THANK you". A gigantic mouse lumbered into view heading straight for the python. The python, opened it's mouth, the mouse continued to grow as it sacrificed for Gabrielle. With the python distracted the butterfly wings lifted Gabrielle out of the cave to freedom.
Glancing back as she flew through the clear blue sky Gabrielle heard an explosion, and saw a million bits of exploded python burst out of the cave.
"Thanks" she whispered, "Thanks muse, witch, butterfly and mouse.
She remembered HIS words "It is often the resented, the reviled, the small and the quiet, who will be part of the greatest parts of life.