if u like rap, read this.. 10 pts!?

Question

We are a group just starting and we want to expose our music to people but we dont know if the songs are good, so please listen to them and let us know. Give your opinion good or bad about each song, tell us what your fav. and just your thoughts on all 4 of them I know I cant give everyone 10 ots, but the answer with the most judgement in each of the songs (weather you think they are good or bad) will ge the 10 points.
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Answer 1

Lyrical OUtlawz
The first song the rapper needs to be a bit louder

I like the second song"nothin 2 lose) although the " yeah" part which was really annoying and repetitive and kinda cheesy you should just take that away or put it every other measure of your song although The melody is very professional sounding

She " is an alright rap song pretty good melody

FLy like me is a tight song and I think all the effects and thebass is a very good effect to the sound
over all i think you guys could go pro

Answer 2

(1.)i luv "I need you Ft Villa"! this song is so effective... specially with the start with the piano play in'... the piano is like very soft.. but then the drums in the back like really gives a catchy beat... it'slike something chris brown would like to sing.. the rap bits really help to make it better... you guys have really nice voices... u lot should have gone for american idol! 1 swear sm1 there sound like usher!

(2.)this kinda freaks me out at the start with that voice nd everything.. it sounds (the intro) like crazy frog (if u dont know what that is, the reason is probably bcuz i liv in the uk and we have different music). but then the person in the background sayinh yeh! really makes it good. the type of person who would make a song like this is probably sm1 like T.I.! THIS SONG IS O.K BUT NO 1 IS BETTER..

(3.) I don't like this song... the voice at the back really isn't workin out...its like too high... a woman singing it would be a bit better..
i can't really get the beat on this...the rapping is cool... this song would've been 2 out of 10 without the rappin.

(4.)this song is o.k i guess... but it is a bit borin', just with the bass at the back, the drummin the rappin, and like some kinda stringed instrument. as i've said before, there could've been a woman to spice it up... or u could get the tempo quicker... rappin all the way through... i dont kno wr the chorus is... the bridge, u kno the tuff.. the song is the same speed all the way... the pitch ain't changin...

I GUESS MY FAVE WOULD'VE HAD TO BE... I NEED YOU FT VILLA. there is just something in that song that could be really sexy to some women.. including me...

Answer 3

Let me tell you, your music is tight!. You are definately on the right track. I know as a producer for a neighborhood group, the struggles of getting your work out there. You just need to keep doing what you're doing, that is, exposing your music. I know good hip hop when I hear it, so you make sure you get the music out! ( sell cd's from the trunk if you have to ). The production and the lyrics are on point so try to get shows at local clubs, visit local radio stations, just do whatever to get your group heard, cause hip hop needs a breath of fresh air!

Answer 4

ok man let me say its good ! but amatuer u need to edit the voice kinda it needs like a kind of singing voice but its gooD.ok first song im feelin it it got the lyrics,beat etc that the ladies would like it would be like on all girls phones and all but just somthin about the voice man!second song was kinda amatuer in the beginin with the low voice you know! But you guys got potential 4 real. The 3rd song is good i like the beat yadadaspeakin its cool.The last i didnt like 2 much it felt like one of those songs from a artist know one cares about they just made it to finish da album feel me.

in all its good just work on the voice is the main thing no one wants to hear people with weird voices and like regular no differece if u talked to them on the streets.serious potential i like it hit up some major record producers and i bet they would give u good advice but i like what i hear keep it up man u might just make it BIG! peace from a friend and new fan!

Answer 5

The beats and sounds are exelent and it sound realy great, I really liked the firsrt song. The only downfall would be the lyrics cuz you cant really hear the words but overall really good job.

Answer 6

i really like the begining of i need you, your songs are really cool. i dont have any bad comments about them, but you need some more or you need to get going with producing a cd CAUSE I ANT TO BUY IT. ya you guys are really talented. KEEP IT UP

Answer 7

i sent u guyz a friend request...da muzik iz good...ilike da beats...i need u iz my fav