a pool table, in the poem you have to give hints of what it is ( a pool table) it is a gift for my dad's birthday and we want to give him a poem to try to figure out what his gift is (because it is custom made adn coming 5 weeks after his birthday) & please make them as hard as possible
2007-02-25 01:07:05 · 3 answers · asked by dea 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Felt flat cool and gray
Clicking, Clacking, Ricochet
Fast Eddie, Hi-clue
or if that's too on the nose;
Squeaky blue feels right
Gather, frame, aligned and tight
click, clack ...watch! the light!
2007-02-25 01:50:09 · answer #1 · answered by cato___ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Together we make
A perfect pair
One is lost with out the other
In a pocket of despair.
When we are at last brought together,
our segregation becomes one.
Together we can make others weep
Together we can challenge the world
Our strength the irony.
Through all the obstacles
along with shots we may face,
Together we are in one place.
One emerald plateau of space.
Apart we are just two
Lost subsistence’s alone
Separate entities if you may.
holding for one another.
To complete our play.
Because together
We make a perfect pair
One is lost with out the other
In a pocket of despair.
2007-02-25 10:34:20 · answer #2 · answered by levonna b 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, i had a think but I couldn't really think of much. I only really came up with the idea of talking about 'a vast green landscape'. It refers both to the world we live in, and the pool table! but thats rubbish
2007-02-25 09:13:44 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋