hello people could u plese help me...i have to write my english homework, and english is not my mother tongue....so i will write that report and somebody just plese correct my grammar mistakes!!!
*teen life today is more relaxed and better then before.Teenagers could do a lot of things.Maybe in the past they didn*t be that much rebbelius like now.My opinion about teens life today is that we have enouh freedom and some of us use that very often(this is not good sentences)....lots of teenagers really don*t care about parents, so they do their own way...that is not good...i agree that we are now almost grown-up but we still need our parents to be with us and help us.I undrestain teenegers cos i am also one of them, so when they want to be like somebody else or want to drink cos everybody do that...but i don*t understain those teenagers which became drog dillers, alcoholics, or smth.else....we should enjoyed in our life cos this years are the best years in our life...add something.pls*
2007-02-23 20:20:25 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Teenage life today is more relaxed and better than before.Teenagers could do a lot of things in thier life.My opinion about teenage life today,is that we have enough freedom and some of us use that very often.Alot of teenagers really don't care about parents, so they go out and do what they like,not caring on how much trouble they can get into or how much problems it can cause at home.I do agree that we are now almost grown-up but we still need our parents to be with us and help us.I understand teenegers because i am one of them, so when they want to be like somebody else or want to drink because everybody else does that but then they are told by parents that they are not allowed,we go out and do it anyway,and then that causes alot of trouble.I don't understand those teenagers which become drug dealers,alcoholics or something else,whats the point on doing that,ruining thier lives?We should enjoy our life because these years are the best years of our life,why go out and become as i said before a drug dealer or get into trouble,be in prison at such a younge age?I think that most teenagers need to realize that you cant go out and destroy the best years of your life,do something with it,yes,go out and have fun but that doesnt mean you have to get into trouble with the poilce or end up in a hospital bed because you drank to much alcohol. try and do the rest or if you have any more problems emial me on my new account tearsdontfall_x@yahoo.co.uk
2007-02-24 01:26:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Teen life today is more relaxed and better then before.Teenagers could do a lot of things. Maybe in the past they didn't be that much rebellious like now. My opinion about teen life today is that we have enough freedom and some of us use that very often(this is not good sentences)....lots of teenagers really don't care about parents, so they do their own way...that is not good...i agree that we are now almost grown-up but we still need our parents to be with us and help us.I understand teenagers because I am also one of them, so when they want to be like somebody else or want to drink because everybody does that...but i don't understand those teenagers which became drug dealers, alcoholics, or something else....we should enjoy our life because these years are the best years in our life...add something.pls
i only edited the spelling. fixing that whole paragraph would take long.
2007-02-23 20:28:16 · answer #2 · answered by Le Parrain 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
*teen life today is more relaxed and better then before.Teenagers can do a lot of things.Maybe in the past they were not so rebellious as they are now.My opinion about teens life today is that we have enough freedom and some of us use that very often lots of teenagers really don*t care about parents, so they go their own way...that is not good...I agree that we are now almost grown-up but we still need our parents to be with us and help us.I understand teenagers because I am also one of them, so when they want to be like somebody else or want to drink because everybody does that...but i don*t understand those teenagers which became drog dealers, alcoholics, or something else....we should enjoy our life because these years are the best years in our life...add something.pls*[write more I will help you]mail your essay to baj_peyee@yahoo.co.in
2007-02-23 22:57:15 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Teen life today is more relaxed and better then before.Teenagers can do a lot of things. Maybe in the past they were not as rebelious as now. My opinion about teen life today is that we have enough (too much?) freedom and some of us use that freedom a lot. Some teenagers really don't care about their parents, so they do things their own way...that is not always good. I agree that we are now almost grown-up but, we still need our parents to be with us and help us. I understand teenagers because I am one of them. I understand when they want to be like somebody else or want to drink because everybody else does - but I don't understand those teenagers who become drug dealers, alcoholics etc. We should enjoy life as teenagers because these years are the best years of our life.
Make sure you check that I have not changed your meaning! I am not adding anything because you have done well yourself and it's your view that you are writing! Well done!
2007-02-23 20:44:02 · answer #4 · answered by sally z 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your style ;)
teen life today is more relaxed and better than before.Teenagers can do a lot of things. Maybe in the past they weren't as rebellious as nowadays. My opinion about teen's life today is that we have enough freedom and we often exercise this right. Lots of teenagers really don't care about their parents, so they do their own thing regardless... this is not good... I agree that we are now almost grown-up but we still need our parents to be with us and help us [very good sentence] I understand teenegers because I am one, so when they [parents?] want to be like somebody else or want to drink because everybody else is drinking... but I don't understand those teenagers who become drug dealers, alcoholics, or something else.... we should enjoy our life because these years are the best years in our life... a time with lots of friends and endless possibilities for the future.
2007-02-23 20:34:04 · answer #5 · answered by Icarus 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Look at two angles. Say "However teenagers are the most tested in Europe with exams like SATS, GCSE, AS and A Levels.
Another issue is that you never use cos as that is the worst english mistake in my opinion and always use because.
2007-02-23 20:41:41 · answer #6 · answered by dlg3579 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
teen mom :D this is genuine and not pretend. it is likewise no longer as corny as secret existence yet i flow to be observing the recent season of secret existence, basically because of the fact i began out it and that i'm curious to be attentive to what's going to take place xD yet teen mom is surprising!! :D i like maci and bentley is the cutest infant ever<33 Farrah isn't a good mom.. Catelynn and Tyler are the cutest couple ever, and are rather in charge with their determination and Amber is a sturdy mom :)
2016-10-01 21:52:22 · answer #7 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ever heard of a dictionary? If you don't own one, go to a Libary. however I would seriously consider asking your tutors for additional eduacational time!
2007-02-24 10:04:37 · answer #8 · answered by Kevan M 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
didn't be?
enough(this is correct spelling)
understand (this is correct spelling)
because (not cos)
dealers and something else(is correct spelling)
Maybe other errors but, this is really bad work sorry.
2007-02-23 20:29:33 · answer #9 · answered by Mid 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you have done spelling mistakes,rebbelius,enouh,under stain,cos,drogdillers,smth else.rest is ok good girl.
2007-02-23 20:31:19 · answer #10 · answered by toploser 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋