Can anyone give me a better problem statement for my report?

Question

My report is basically about the alteration of the culture of a native Filipino group because of tourism. FOR THOSE WHO ARE GOOD WITH WORDS OR REPORTS OR WHATEVER, PLEASE HELP! Serious answers only please.

Here's my current problem statement:

Problem Statement: Are tourism’s efforts to “preserve” indigenous culture in the Cordillera Region actually resulting to it being compromised?

Answer 1

Will the current efforts of the tourism trade compromise, rather than preserve the indigenous culture in the Cordillera Region.

Just a rewording but it sounds better. :-) Not really enough details to do more. Good luck

Answer 2

Change 'resulting to' to 'resulting in'.