He stands and leans against the wall,
his bitter tears they burn and fall
into the green beneath his feet
It's what he sowed and now he reaps.....
continue next four lines the best gets the points.
2007-02-23 11:42:04 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Wow! people you are real poets, these lines you have written have totally blown me away! great!
2007-02-23 11:52:58 · update #1
He wonders and sighs
And still cries
At the mistake he made
Which will never fade
2007-02-23 11:45:20 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 1⤋
OK lets try this.
the trial and tribulations of yearning to be undone, dreams and fantasy's waiting to be sung, distance and miles from the seasonal fiesta of the sun, desperation of limitations with wrinkles as they horrifically come. memories left for survivors none?
2007-02-23 11:51:03 · answer #2 · answered by Kill_Me_Now! 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
His beady eyes gave her the creeps
His bloody hands have made her sleep
Her body's twisted against the ground
He holds his head and flails around
2007-02-23 12:14:31 · answer #3 · answered by blahblah 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
An empty harvest from the field,
A barren heart and loveless yield.
The fertile ground he sought to grow,
How special the woman he'll never know.
(hope you like it)
2007-02-23 11:49:51 · answer #4 · answered by Mr 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
all he has lived and fought for
is now behind the neighbors door
for what he thought was his his son
is just the product of a night of fun!
2007-02-23 11:47:15 · answer #5 · answered by tiny likes clams 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
He lies down on the ground
His beating heart the only sound
He knows not why he cries
He only knows all must die
2007-02-23 11:54:09 · answer #6 · answered by Space Ace 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
to think of her was so heartbreaking,
her love, her life.. was for the taking.
Never will he get to see the joy,
that life had now selfishly destroyed.
2007-02-23 11:46:38 · answer #7 · answered by ☆Karma☆ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
he really truly wants her back,
he knows her heart now has a crack,
he thought he really cared a lot,
now he knows their love was bought.
2007-02-23 11:44:36 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋