help me fix my poem, please?(easy)?

Question

I'm writing a cinquain using a metaphor, too.
A cinquain is a poem with five line with 22 sylables. On the first line it has 2 then 4,6,8,2.

This is what i have so far, but some lines have more syllables, help me fix it, please!

I hear
music in my ear
it's a whisper in my ear
it's an addiction to me
music

Answer 1

I hear < 2
mu.sic soft.ley < 4
a whis.per in my ear < 6
it is an ad.dic.tion to me < 8
mu.sic <2


Hows that.. I think it fits.

yours is a nice verse too.

Answer 2

I hear
Songs in my ear
They whisper in my ear
It's like an addiction to me
Music

Answer 3

Try...

Music
My ear can hear (or "Heard by my ear")
A whisper in my ear
It is an addiction to me
Music

or

My ear
Music I hear
A whisper that's so clear
It's such an addiction to me
Music

Lotta different ways to slice it... hope this helps...


Good luck! :)

Answer 4

Now a spark plug wire through the injector would definitely give something a bang! Sometimes people enjoy paying back debts! lol

Answer 5

I hear
music in my ear
it's a whisper in my ear
it's the fire of an addiction to me
sweet music

Answer 6

I hear
Music right hear
It whispers in my ear
A soulful addiction to me
Music

Answer 7

It's love
In my body
The notes float everywhere
Solid addiction I can't bear
Music

You should write your own poems though

Answer 8

I hear
Music in my ear
It's whispers gently to my soul
And lightens up the mirror to my spirit,
Adding Sweetness.