its in my essay to get into honors english
For example, for my 12th birthday she bought me a picture with purple flowers and sweet swirls for my bedroom that says “Believe in yourself and the magic will happen”.
2007-02-23 11:29:34 · 8 answers · asked by jessica :] 5 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
sorry about grammEr. i was having a blonde moment.
2007-02-23 11:53:31 · update #1
It is a bit of a run on. Also, there needs to be a comma before the quotes and the period at the and needs to be inside the quotes. Consider this revision.
For example, for my 12th birthday she bought me a picture for my bedroom. It shows purple flowers, sweet swirls, and it says, "Believe in yourself and the magic will happen."
2007-02-23 11:37:07 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
[It is a bit of a run on. Also, there needs to be a comma before the quotes and the period at the and needs to be inside the quotes.]
Consider this revision:
For example, ON my 12th birthday she bought me a picture for my bedroom. It's a lovely display of purple flowers and sweet swirls, paired with the quote, "Believe in yourself and the magic will happen."
2007-02-23 12:04:15 · answer #2 · answered by f8_smyled 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For example, for my twelfth birthday, she bought me a picture with purple flowers and sweet swirls for my bedroom which reads “Believe in yourself and the magic will happen”.
2007-02-23 11:36:30 · answer #3 · answered by Just another opinion 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
For example, for my 12th birthday she bought me a picture with purple flowers and sweet swirls for my bedroom that says “Believe in yourself and the magic will happen”.
I think it might be "For my twelfth birthday, she bought me..."
2007-02-23 11:35:05 · answer #4 · answered by Sakura-kun 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Firstly, it's grammar*, not grammer.
I would put ...a picture for my bedroom...
'Believe in yourself, and the magic will happen'
2007-02-23 11:36:14 · answer #5 · answered by emilia_3272 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you can't spell grammar you shouldn't be in an honors english program.
2007-02-23 11:41:32 · answer #6 · answered by professorc 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I'll check your spelling too. It's "grammar."
2007-02-23 11:33:35 · answer #7 · answered by pak1789 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is grammar.
2007-02-23 11:34:07 · answer #8 · answered by simpleton989 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋