you kissed me on the lips
ever so soft
as we touch
i felt like i could float on clounds
i could smell the breathmints on your soft lips
i dream about that day almost everyday.....
would you come back just for one more kiss?
im dont call this a peom its more of a little writing......
so what do you think?!?!!?!?!?!
2007-02-23 09:43:20 · 13 answers · asked by â?¥ ~soccer luver~ â?¥ aka Zoe 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
im a soccer lover....and
1.im not in scottland
2.im a girl
3.i dont like beer (never had it)
4. i like peoms so what
BITE ME
2007-02-23 09:51:19 · update #1
ya ya
the breath mints my older sister told me to add..........
2007-02-23 09:53:06 · update #2
cute
2007-02-23 09:45:47 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it -- breath mints included. It's real.
1) I'm not either.
2) So am I
3) Neither do I.
4) Me, too.
I'd rather not.
2007-02-23 17:55:07 · answer #2 · answered by comet girl...DUCK! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's OK except where did the breathmint thing come from ???
2007-02-23 17:50:10 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it all apart from the breathmints part
2007-02-23 17:46:22 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, but this would not go down well with soccer lovers in Scotland.
We tend to dream about beer and meat pies.
Uncouth I know, but there you are.
2007-02-23 17:48:41 · answer #5 · answered by mcfifi 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
good but leave out the breathmint part :)â¥
2007-02-23 17:47:09 · answer #6 · answered by summer ♥ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
great for a breath mint commercial
2007-02-23 17:51:14 · answer #7 · answered by Sexxssay? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it
2007-02-23 17:47:25 · answer #8 · answered by Memeiko 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes that is pretty
2007-02-23 17:50:50 · answer #9 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hahahahaha...clounds and breath mints.
2007-02-23 17:46:51 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋