We need some time to get away
Even if its for one day
All the pressures of the week
It gets so bad we do not speak
For our love is true and pure
Some time away will be the cure
For theses pressures wear and tear
It seems our love now goes no where
Lets get away, exotic beach
And drink some wine, get slurry speach
We'll be alone, and who will care
We'll speak our minds and clear the air
We always knew our love was strong
It does test us, our days are long
But all and all there is a light
We kiss each other every night
But when I offered her my hand
I promised here I'd be her man
No matter what the future brings
We made a promise with our rings
2007-02-22 23:13:13 · 4 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
9
2007-02-22 23:24:28 · answer #1 · answered by Veronica 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww how sweet 10 and enter it into the poetry.com contest
2007-02-23 07:28:35 · answer #2 · answered by Mary O 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is pretty good and if you keep at it you will be darn good! You have a knack for poetry!
2007-02-23 07:18:13 · answer #3 · answered by Gerry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very nice!. I'd say 10!
2007-02-23 07:25:55 · answer #4 · answered by sapphire_wisdom 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋