there was a young man from Crete
who had a large box of peat
when asked for the reason
he said it's to season
my dinner which will be of meat
2007-02-22 21:31:47 · 11 answers · asked by Boofie 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
an answer for you I have not,
except that I think your poem is rot,
please do not take offense,
I am no poet in my defense.
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2007-02-22 21:48:53 · answer #1 · answered by supagrrrl84 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Its not bad at least u have "rhyme" in it..talking of peat and meat ..."eat" as well as reason and Season. But u need to make it abit longer. Mayb 7 lines then it cld qualify to b a sonnet. Other wise keep it up.
2007-02-23 05:46:46 · answer #2 · answered by smart_eluh 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2007-02-23 05:35:59 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Extraordinary! Loads of imagination! Good for you , Boofie!
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2007-02-23 05:52:08 · answer #4 · answered by Wendy 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Free style?
No comments, just a star from me :)
2007-02-23 06:56:18 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh Boofie you are so clever! Did Mommy like it,too? :o)
2007-02-23 06:08:35 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Short and sweet
2007-02-23 05:46:56 · answer #7 · answered by Gripper 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dude, that's pretty lame
2007-02-23 05:36:01 · answer #8 · answered by Desiree J 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Worms....nothing but worms.
2007-02-23 05:35:00 · answer #9 · answered by gone 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Pretty nice. =)
2007-02-23 05:54:28 · answer #10 · answered by Jaded 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋