tension
children have tension about their examination
parents have tension about their education
ministers have tension about their towns administration
old people have tension about their pension
earth has tension about it's distruction
environment has tension about the rate of it's pollution
robbers have tension about their name being mentioned
tension, tension, tension
life
Life is like mathematics
friends to added
enimies to be subtracted
happiness to be multiplied
sorrows to be divided
2007-02-22 21:23:15 · 25 answers · asked by Raven 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
If U have written this then these r awesome.I think U r a keen observer of real world like me and one thing in U r ahead of me is to express the feeling. Keep it up man,u will dafinately ROCK the world.
2007-02-23 16:20:56 · answer #1 · answered by AbuSaleh 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
These are items from collection of a person who has just earned 8132 points in 9 months with 26% answers selected as BEST.
Both the poems are wonderful and expressive.
Congrats for your achievements.
2007-02-27 05:26:10 · answer #2 · answered by PK LAMBA 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Prefer the first one to the second one. It would make a really good punk rock or punk pop song. I can totally imagine Green Day using it.
2007-02-23 05:29:19 · answer #3 · answered by Snow White 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
__added in my collection,tension subtracted,points multiplied, and divided among the friends___
2007-03-02 05:42:49 · answer #4 · answered by xxsanxx 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poems are both quite truthful but at the same time common. i've heard the second one a zillion times.
2007-02-23 05:35:00 · answer #5 · answered by garima 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I prefer the 2nd one.
Very cute.
2007-02-23 05:29:34 · answer #6 · answered by Je♥n 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great.10/10.
2007-02-23 05:39:13 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ive heard the second one before....but the first one is pretty gud!!
keep the flame of imagination alive!!
2007-02-23 09:37:23 · answer #8 · answered by ravishin 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do you know what? Your poems are great! I really do like them.
2007-02-23 05:33:16 · answer #9 · answered by George 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like 2nd one.
Its really very meaningfull.
you rocks.
2007-02-23 05:50:29 · answer #10 · answered by Sexy Sam 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋