Life is like a roller coaster it feels like it will go on for ever but it ends, Like a bird who takes to flight and then gets shot down, If you let people put you down, your rollercoaster will end quite soon!
2007-02-22 21:19:36 · 18 answers · asked by Katja ie tattybow 1 in Games & Recreation ➔ Amusement Parks
Please read the rest of my poems!
2007-02-22 21:26:27 · update #1
Thank you the Oak!
2007-02-22 21:44:52 · update #2
It's my aunts idea to do it about roller coasters! but i wrote it!
2007-02-23 07:14:50 · update #3
I wrote it, her 13 year old neice wrote it!
2007-02-23 17:01:42 · update #4
Hi Tatty Bow. the Oak is right Gingerpeachy just a self obsessed moron and i told them so. poems are the same as music we all have different taste. you go girl.
2007-02-22 21:50:18 · answer #1 · answered by *♥* donna *♥* 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Hi Tattybow! You know that horrid person Gingerpeachy? They asked a question a while ago. You might be interested in the responses to it. Just so you know that a lot of people disagree with the idiot and that they are rude to just about everyone. (Despite constantly picking on you, bully that they are). Good for you that you have kept on going! If you want to see the question Gingerpeachy asked click on "The Oak" below my icon and scroll down to my answers. It is the 2nd one down "Is Everyone Crazy?". If you are cool not bothering then that's fine. It is just a chance to see the bully get what they deserve. I hate bullies! All the best, The Oak!
I think your poem should be longer, but I think it sums up what life can be like here on yahoo sometimes.
2007-02-22 21:37:19 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Nice poem I liked the part where the bird takes flight and then gets shot down really funny
2007-03-01 05:20:49 · answer #3 · answered by Jacquimc 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2016-12-04 20:13:41 · answer #4 · answered by laranjeira 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hm, your aunt has a beautiful poem and I like it a lot. I think it is very true what she wrote. Have a wonderful day.
Pablo
2007-02-22 22:30:36 · answer #5 · answered by Scott 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow your nans a real thinker,very deep and proffetic,love the connection between life and rollercoaster,keepit up nan lets hear some more.
2007-02-23 12:21:41 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's kind of dull and the ideas are rather scattered, and need more explanation... i am not understanding the whole bird thing... it's one of those instances where it makes complete sense to the author, but no so much the audience. Keep on trying!
2007-02-25 17:05:39 · answer #7 · answered by Sarah C- Equine Help 101 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'm no fan of poems but I guess ur aunt's is cool-and quite true
2007-02-22 21:50:49 · answer #8 · answered by Dark Prince 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, it is quite insightful. We are the ones who dictate how people will treat us, not the other way around.
2007-03-02 16:14:04 · answer #9 · answered by Mr unsure 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW! Great poem!
2007-02-23 12:56:22 · answer #10 · answered by Ale C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋