I dont have dreams.How quick can a thought be?
Is it a good thing?
Some are good some are bad.
And some are just plain sad.
And I know im not the only one but it seems that it just happens to me.
I see everything like they are dreams.
It doesnt feel like they are real.
So when I have dreams how would that feel????
2007-02-22 16:57:27 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
OMG GURL DAT WAS GUD...I AM 14 ALSO...BUT YEA THAT WAS GUD FOR SUM1 OUR AGE!!!
2007-02-22 17:03:35 · answer #1 · answered by neecy boo 1 · 0⤊ 3⤋
Shantrees-Hello. Very good poem. Good feelings. Good inner
sight. Keep writing and sharing because you're on a roll.
Let your dreams be your guide,
Like a friend always by your side.
Deeply feel all your dreams,
It's not as hard as it seems.
When you're able to just let go,
That's when words easily flow.
In a relaxed state of mind,
The proper words you will find.
Greatness can be yours, girl,
Write up a storm, you're in a whirl.
Practice, then practice some more,
Heaven's gates will be your front door.
2007-02-26 22:34:31 · answer #2 · answered by SlownEasy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you want attention and it's sad that you don't get any from your parents. You seem to post this stuff all over the place and not only isn't it poetry, it's poorly written, grammatically incorrect, and it sounds like you are having some kind of breakdown. You always ask us how we like it and then say you are 14, and type "lol." Dear, I think you need a counselor or a psychologist or someone to help you with your troubles, because you have posted four or five of these in different categories, and they are all whining, dreary diatribes about how the world is stomping on you. And no, we are not jealous of your talent (you don't have any) we just want you to take your meds, or get help, or something. You seem very troubled and you certainly feel sorry for yourself, that is evident.
2007-02-23 01:42:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 2⤋
It's nice when you first read it and just look at it for what it is. If you send it to someone who picks apart poems for a living they would say that it rhymes but it doesn't make much sense. You kind of contradict yourself by stating that you do not dream, but you go on to say that the thoughts that you have are LIKE dreams! Dreams don't have to be at night while you are sleeping.
You don't have dreams and thoughts, naturally, come quickly, but they are separate. Both are good. But thoughts are thoughts, and dreams are dreams whether they be at night, or daydreams.
Stick with poetry, you are on the right track, but learn to distinguish between your subjects.
2007-02-23 01:11:46 · answer #4 · answered by ktterdfurguson 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
I really like it.
There's NOTHING better than the poetry by 14 year olds. When I was 14 I was with a group that handed out our poetry to people in the streets. Keep at it. Express yourself. When you read them years later you will be proud.
2007-02-23 01:28:29 · answer #5 · answered by yutu34 4 · 0⤊ 3⤋
killer.read this.Im never gonna grow-up im never gonna get married,im gonna stay home and play with myself poof im a fairy
2007-02-25 18:06:02 · answer #6 · answered by ashkicker420 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep up the good work girlie!!!
2007-02-23 01:06:02 · answer #7 · answered by Sweet29 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
whoa....dddeeeeepp =O
2007-02-23 01:01:03 · answer #8 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋