Help! Writing a conclusion.?

Question

I'm not really asking you to write it, but maybe start me off? I have to write a conclusion to a research paper about William Shakespeare's Successs as an actor/playwright. This is the begining-- it should help you understand what the paper is about.

*William Shakespeare is renowned all over the world for being one of the most successful playwrights in history. Not only did this acclaimed literary genius write plays, but he acted as well. Shakespeare began as an actor, had success as a playwright, and even co-owned a thriving acting company and theater.

Answer 1

What's missing is the 1, 2 3 method.

1. Tell em what you're going to tell them.
I want you to know that I think W. Shakespeare is successful.
2. Tell em.
W. Sheakespeare was successful because - - -
3. Tell em what you told em.
In conclusion, W. Shakespeare began as an actor and even was a successful acting company and theater - in - - - -

What's missing is YOU - I'm looking for what you think.
I don't want a regurgitation of what others think.
What's so special about this guy?
I don't hear your "heart" in your writing.
It seems superficial.
Can you please tell me what and if he's so great in (attitude, making money, career choice - writing, spending money wisely, working, work ethic, genius - in what, ?
I don't care that your teachers think he's great.
I only care about your thoughts - and I'd so like to hear and read your thoughts.
OK? - sorry if this is tough - but you're on the right track - and can get what's really the point in writing.

GOD bless us one and all, always.
MBA-Boston Univ.
CPA-retired

Answer 2

A conclusion is like wrapping your essay in pretty paper; the final sentence, like the bow.

"Steinbeck's "Grapes of Wrath" was an awkward beacon for a populace that 'didn't want to see'. His "Cannery Row" trilogy, with it's gentle, droll humour removed public opprobation of 'light reading'. And, last but not least, his "East of Eden" highlighted unspoken taboos - and explained them. In short, the warp and woof of the tapestry that is literature would not be as colorful, as bright, as kind, without John Steinbeck."