1 o' clock
1 o' clock on the dot,
waiting by the mailbox.
Not a letter in sight,
nor a valentine.
Day and Night ,
waiting by the mail box.
1o'clock on the dot,
Valentines in the box.
Broken Heart!
I gave you my heart and you tore it apart,
I gave you my life but you took it away,
You said you loved me but you took it back.
I said I’d stay with you forever,
But I took it back when you said goodbye.
Forever Yours!
I can give you my heart,
But I can take it back.
But if you love me,
Forever with you it will stay.
Heart Broken!
You said you loved me and cared for me, and that you would never do anything to hurt me or to make me cry. But you did the worst thing that someone could ever do, you broke my heart. You loved me, I loved you. But now all the memories, all the anniversaries, and most importantly all the love that we had for each other is gone now and forever, all because you broke my heart.
All written by: J.C. (me)
2007-02-22 12:04:26 · 9 answers · asked by LivingInnuendo~♫ 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I like your poems. there are sites online that have contests..You should give it a try,,
BUT, I saw where you give your dog grapes..Grapes have been recently discovered to cause major kidney damage in dogs..any grapes, whether raisins or fresh..Just hought you would want to know..I used to allow my dogs grapes, too...
2007-02-27 06:27:20 · answer #1 · answered by Chetco 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
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2016-09-29 12:04:34 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yup there good poems. Nice Job!
2007-02-22 12:08:01 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
aww its sad =(
its not bad, just keep working on your poems, and as long as you put your whole heart and soul in it, it will be a great poem, that's all it matters.
Ignore the hater up there...and keep it up! =) Gluck
2007-02-27 16:23:13 · answer #4 · answered by Honey 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like the last one. And it is practically my life.
2007-03-02 00:50:39 · answer #5 · answered by maxine 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow i'm impressed. great job i like ur use of voacabulary keep it up!
2007-02-22 12:09:56 · answer #6 · answered by Angry Little Fairy 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Corny and cliche
2007-02-22 12:07:00 · answer #7 · answered by Susie 6 · 1⤊ 3⤋
CORNY------ What 1st grader did you steal those from?
2007-03-02 11:51:50 · answer #8 · answered by Mrs.Beckford 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
yeah
theyre actually really good
2007-03-02 12:03:40 · answer #9 · answered by Nu 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋