frozen tears broken hearts confused minds we have tell the pain and the pain shall go away but if tho shall not want to tell only those who you call friends and those you love can heal the pain and the pain shall go away i made it up and i want to know what ppl would say about it
2007-02-22 11:57:57 · 6 answers · asked by dreamer 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Mythology & Folklore
pretty cool pomes you have there moon and i guess it would be better if it were formated i guess but i just wrote it lol
2007-02-22 12:14:48 · update #1
I love it! Weird poetry is my specialty! (see http://poemhunter.com/storm-hollywing/ or http://www.stormhollywing.tk )
I think you should format it like this (I changed a couple words):
frozen tears
broken hearts
confused minds
we have to tell the pain
so the pain shall go
away
but if thou shall want to tell
only those who you call friends
and those you love
it can heal the pain and
the pain will go away
2007-02-22 12:06:28 · answer #1 · answered by moonfreak♦ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Some one must of got mad and broke their heart out side on a cold day and their tears froze,because your minds were confused to whether or not you loved each other,so you run to your mommies where you know you are loved and cry , then the hurt can go away. I was also bored.
2007-02-22 20:10:31 · answer #2 · answered by nadine_forbear 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Cool
2007-02-22 20:06:02 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Pretty cool, some deep thoughts there, definitely deeper than Jade is capapble of I guess.
2007-02-22 20:05:48 · answer #4 · answered by Lt. Dan reborn 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I like it! Very dark. Keep up the good work.
2007-02-22 20:06:12 · answer #5 · answered by n0tsan3 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I dunno know what you are talking about but maybe I'm only as deep as a cup of water.
2007-02-22 20:02:24 · answer #6 · answered by Jade 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋