Is this awkward sentence grammatically correct: Mr. Jones, with the service I have provided you today, are you very satisfied?
2007-02-22 11:27:59 · 4 answers · asked by DeeDee 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Mr. Jones are you completely satisfied with the services you have been provided by me today ?
2007-02-25 20:55:14 · answer #1 · answered by I V X 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would rearrange the sentence so it reads
Mr. Jones, are you satisfied with services I have provided for you today?
If you wanted to be formal I would use the following sentence:
Mr. Jones, are you satisfied with services you have received today?
2007-02-22 19:48:55 · answer #2 · answered by EW 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
No, put Mr. Jones with are you satisfied?
An infinitive is to plus a verb---to go, to walk, etc.
2007-02-22 19:31:56 · answer #3 · answered by violetb 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Mr Jones, are you very satisfied with the service you have received to day" would be better.
A split infinitive would be like this: To gladly go (should be to go gladly).
2007-02-22 19:38:10 · answer #4 · answered by zen 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋