Please help me end this little poem, I can't find anything that rhymes...or if you have any other ideas, it'll be apprecciated.
Thanks!
"I'm so thankful to have met you
I'll always keep you in my heart
Because that's where people like you ????????????
what do I write????
2007-02-22 07:59:13 · 7 answers · asked by CuriousMe 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Will linger if they're smart
Remain while we're apart
Tie up their donkey cart
Eat chili dogs and fart
Or may I suggest you get off the rhyme train? Try writing so you're true to the sentiment rather than the strict quatrain form. I think you'll be happier with the finished product if you do.
2007-02-22 08:06:58 · answer #1 · answered by nbsandiego 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm so thankful to have met you
I'll keep you in my heart
We will never part
Forever and Always
I will love you
2007-02-22 18:57:44 · answer #2 · answered by Sunshine 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm so thankful to have met you
I'll always keep you in my heart
Because it's people like you
who love you for who you really are
I'm so thankful to have met you
I'll always keep you in my heart
Because it's people like you
Who i never wan't to be be apart
Hope you like them =] I changed the third line a bit though?
x
2007-02-22 16:04:18 · answer #3 · answered by Miss. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Get rid of the what do i write and do. People like you stay in my heart.
2007-02-22 19:24:02 · answer #4 · answered by pieloverkid 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
" I'm so thankful to have met you I'll always keep you in my heart so each time we meet we will always have a fresh start
2007-02-22 16:14:10 · answer #5 · answered by bruce r 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i just want to say i love you
2007-02-26 14:57:32 · answer #6 · answered by Britbrat 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
will stay and never part
2007-02-22 16:52:46 · answer #7 · answered by Nancy M 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋