Go easy, I'm only 14.
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It’s not my call, and not my time,
But if I carry on I won’t be just fine,
I’ve kept it from you for so long,
And now I know where I belong,
I’ve made mistakes and I’ve done wrong,
But now, with you, is where I belong.
The days go by, I dream of you,
And all the things that we could do,
But you are claimed by another man,
If only you could understand,
The way I make this loving claim,
And how distress is not my aim.
And yes I love you, don’t deny,
You’ve never felt a love inside,
I’m just a poet sitting here,
Who loves you so and needs you dear,
For I can’t function without hope,
And without function I can’t cope.
It was a mistake I regret,
And with every other girl I’ve met,
It’s never been even near the same,
Trust me, dear, this is not a game.
For I need you to make me whole,
To hold me tight and save my soul.
2007-02-22 02:16:15 · 9 answers · asked by Chris Down 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
To Dallas: Heh, sure. If you want a title, it's called 'Eilidh'.
2007-02-22 05:47:00 · update #1
Wow, I seriously like that, no lie. For only 14, youre very well spoken. I enjoyed it.
2007-02-22 02:18:52 · answer #1 · answered by Henry ♫ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm sorry that i did no longer get the prospect to examine them. we are on holiday for a protracted weekend and that i've got been checking in now and back to get far off from the group, yet i could no longer stay hidden for long. Reporting is cruel, yet juvenile. i do no longer know how a poem a pair of son could desire to be seen a positioned up against the Yahoo "community" regulations. EDIT: thank you for posting the poem, Ma. that's an exquisite poem, full of excitement and gratitude. The so-noted as "community" could desire to be run by utilising machines.
2016-09-29 11:25:49 · answer #2 · answered by faim 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good. I use to write all the time but one day I just had writers block. It is real too. I would watch out putting it on the internet because someone may try to take it though.
2007-02-22 02:21:44 · answer #3 · answered by david r 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you are a gifted poet. That poem flows so easy. I am totally impressed. Keep it up. Writing is your forte. Go for it.
2007-02-22 02:27:51 · answer #4 · answered by The Count 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wonderful, well beyond your age! 10/10 + a star
2007-02-22 02:21:28 · answer #5 · answered by tuxgal3 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good job. especially for 14. keep up the good work.
2007-02-22 02:20:48 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well done and can I use it? To help some kids in my writting class.
2007-02-22 02:27:16 · answer #7 · answered by Dallas S 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awesome job man!
I like it!
2007-02-22 02:18:44 · answer #8 · answered by Mindrape 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yea...I think you did a GREAT job on it ....
nice work!
:)........................you get a smiley!
2007-02-22 02:20:09 · answer #9 · answered by ~*The Show Must Go On*~ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋