only anwser if your gonna be serious...im writing this thing about a guy im talkn too & we're gettin serious what would ryhme with this last line?
when i talk 2 u i kan't help but smile from ear to ear
wen u speak it seems like your beside me here
Wen u say ur fallin 4 me i get all warm inside
im sorry but i kan't let mi feelins hide
theres this thing thatchu do 2 me that i just kan't explain
babie boi da way im feelin u, its krazie insane
you treat me like i havn't been treated for awhile
& let me tell you ur doin a good job because ur making me smile
your kute & funny & hella sweet too
I kan't wait till i kan say dat im ur boo
It seems too perfect, it seems so real ........i jus need one more line 4 that part lol help?!
2007-02-21 15:52:07 · 15 answers · asked by CuTiE WiD A WhOle LoTtA Bo0ty 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I might have a few suggestions
Be with me and I'll show you what our love can reveal
You make me feel things that i never feel
You amazing and I have so much appeal
Sorry all i got on the top of my head.
Good Luck!
2007-02-21 15:57:54 · answer #1 · answered by Tyler 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
your kute & funny & hella sweet too
I kan't wait till i kan say dat im ur boo
It seems too perfect, it seems so real
neks tyme i rite i'll trie 2 speel.
2007-02-21 23:58:05 · answer #2 · answered by Crash 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
I Can't Help It Baby...That's Just The Way That I Feel.
2007-02-21 23:58:27 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Im a good poem writer....
My broken heart will need a kiss from you to heal.
I love you, thats just how i feel
2007-02-21 23:57:30 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
this may work for the last line "It seems too perfect, it seems so real,But one day me and u will be together for ever & ever and then only i'll be your real boo"
2007-02-22 00:00:26 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try..yabba dabba dooo..worked for Fred..
ya kin get it fer a happy meel..
2007-02-21 23:55:18 · answer #6 · answered by metoo 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Inside o me u I wanna feel.
2007-02-21 23:56:24 · answer #7 · answered by Mr 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"baby boi im fallen for u so catch me as u neal
2007-02-22 00:01:46 · answer #8 · answered by mu l 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
o babie this is how you make me feel
...or...
you got me bug-eyed like a baby seal
good luck âº
2007-02-21 23:57:17 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
mothers is good but doesn't really work in your poem so how about something like.....
Tell me babes wuz the deal??
2007-02-21 23:58:04 · answer #10 · answered by Rhylie and Paiyden 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋